Would like Feedback for designs (im still a newbie) :D

[Aytex]

Constructive or Destructive feedback is ok

So far 2 MSI Wallpapers (1080p)

If you wish to download them go to my profile's gallary listed under MSI

http://linustechtips.com/main/gallery/album/3099-msi/

[cheeze_tartz]

it sucks

 

jk thats freakin awesome if u ask me. 69/10 - IGN

[TheAmazingCookieFromSquare]

The second one is better because it has a more 970 feeling to it

[ObeseWalrus]

That's awesome, would you make a windforce one too?

[Lolzious]

That's pretty good.

Did you draw the MSI dragon yourself or was it just a PNG?

[TheKDub]

Noice.

[Sir Asvald]

Constructive or Destructive feedback is ok

So far 2 MSI Wallpapers (1080p)

So awesome!!, gonna use the second one as my wallpaper.

[Aytex]

it sucks

 

jk thats freakin awesome if u ask me. 69/10 - IGN

thanks bby

[Aytex]

That's pretty good.

Did you draw the MSI dragon yourself or was it just a PNG?

dragon i got from google but i designed everything else. This is adobe illustrator btw so their all scaler meaning you can resize without losing the look

[Guest]

The colour of the dragon in the second one should match the colour of the far right IMO. 

 

If it does, correct me. 

 

EDIT: They look pretty good though. 

[FaZe Booce]

Constructive or Destructive feedback is ok

So far 2 MSI Wallpapers (1080p)

 

-quickscoped-

 

Holy balls. 2nd one is my fav

[minibois]

dragon i got from google but i designed everything else. This is adobe illustrator btw so their all scaler meaning you can resize without losing the look

vector graphics.

[Juanse]

They look cool

[Aytex]

That's awesome, would you make a windforce one too?

ill work on it right now  what style do you want the 1st one or second

[ObeseWalrus]

ill work on it right now  what style do you want the 1st one or second

whatever u feel like.

[Dougaroo]

Constructive or Destructive feedback is ok

So far 2 MSI Wallpapers (1080p)

 

Meh. First one is just a very basic gradient. Could be done in photoshop really quick. (plus that small shadow effect)

Second one had more work then the first one. But still. Shapes with a shadow effect. It looks nice, not going to lie (at least the second one).

[Aytex]

The colour of the dragon in the second one should match the colour of the far right IMO. 

 

If it does, correct me. 

 

EDIT: They look pretty good though. 

yea it was off. I fixed it

[rtpb5642]

Thanks for my new wallpaper

 

EDIT: they dont seem to be 1080p could u upload them to a place where i can get the full res images?

[Rohith_Kumar_Sp]

dragon i got from google but i designed everything else. This is adobe illustrator btw so their all scaler meaning you can resize without losing the look

basically MSI dragon with the rest you edited ofcourse, but still MSI's 

[Aytex]

basically MSI dragon with the rest you edited ofcourse, but still MSI's 

ya pretty much lol

[Aytex]

That's awesome, would you make a windforce one too?

its done go to my profile's gallary to download

[Aytex]

Thanks for my new wallpaper

 

EDIT: they dont seem to be 1080p could u upload them to a place where i can get the full res images?

http://linustechtips.com/main/gallery/album/3099-msi/

[D4RK]

Image 1:

Its fine as it is, but its too simple and been done before, to make it your own you can add texture or patterns to the background. however if u like to keep the clean background you can add bevel to the dragon logo to make it pop, or try to make it look like its ingraved in the background.

 

Image 2&3:

Your main focus is the logo so the logo should take 60% or more from the screen, what you need to do is to take your layered design thats on the right side and move to more to the right, also reduce the distance between each layer so u can fit them all in 40%or less from the image size. As for the logos themselves, try to not crop them and move the gigabyte logo to the center vertically and a bit to the right side.

 

 

Here is a tip, when you are working on a design for a while you will tend to get used to it and miss lots of small mistakes, to avoid that you can flip the image horizontally "mirror" then you will see the image like you are kinda seeing it for thee first time and you see all the mistakes.

 

Hope this helps

[Aytex]

Image 1:

Its fine as it is, but its too simple and been done before, to make it your own you can add texture or patterns to the background. however if u like to keep the clean background you can add bevel to the dragon logo to make it pop, or try to make it look like its ingraved in the background.

 

Image 2&3:

Your main focus is the logo so the logo should take 60% or more from the screen, what you need to do is to take your layered design thats on the right side and move to more to the right, also reduce the distance between each layer so u can fit them all in 40%or less from the image size. As for the logos themselves, try to not crop them and move the gigabyte logo to the center vertically and a bit to the right side.

 

 

Here is a tip, when you are working on a design for a while you will tend to get used to it and miss lots of small mistakes, to avoid that you can flip the image horizontally "mirror" then you will see the image like you are kinda seeing it for thee first time and you see all the mistakes.

 

Hope this helps

how do u do the part on image 1

thanks for adive on image 2

[D4RK]

how do u do the part on image 1

thanks for adive on image 2

i personally use photoshop more than illustrator so cant really tellbu which tools tobuse for the bevel, as for the pattern try to use something like honeycomb pattern, make 1 oitline and copy paste it till you fill the whole background.

I am currently lying on the bed about to sleep, if u like i can show a example tomorrow.