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The website was born this morning so it's still pretty Young but I would like to know what you think about it and what could I improve or add on it, thanks!

http://krytopsyx.webs.com/

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Hmm.. Link?

 

You fixed it.

 

Maybe you can let the PC parts page look a bit better.  Now it looks like a notepad file put into a really nice looking border (talking about the rest of your site). Also, you don't have a favicon yet, maybe the logo of your site should be that.

Also, no music pls..

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@Krytopsy I shat my pants when the music started playing, my speakers were at full volume.

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I don't like it. the bla bla bla fancy writing PC and the thing with two goals... u_u are you 12 or something?

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not bad, i wouldent put the amd fanboy bit tho

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I'm not even near to be webmaster, I'm a custom PC builder for years that want to share his knowledge at one place instead of repeating myself over and over.

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Lose the music.

 

Or at least replace it with something good like TOOL

Ketchup is better than mustard.

GUI is better than Command Line Interface.

Dubs are better than subs

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Ahah I know, I don't do it for the views, there is nothing wrong to be a AMD users, bu a fan boy, yes.

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Ahah I know, I don't do it for the views, there is nothing wrong to be a AMD users, bu a fan boy, yes.

same can be said for nvidia or intel fanboys

My Setup :P

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I dont really like any of it

 

The fanboy bit, the music, boring design... and the information on the PC Parts bit is not particularly useful to a newbie

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Get rid of the AMD fanboy bit, get rid of the music, change title font, and for the love of god change the PC Parts thing, since it's just... Stupid.

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I'm working on it but I already though about a specific section for more detailed, experiences in all differents parts. Thanks for the comment!

But at least when Intel/Nvidia says they have the best, it's actually true. I don't see Windows/Blackberry users saying their products are better then iOS and Android.

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But at least when Intel/Nvidia says they have the best, it's actually true. I don't see Windows/Blackberry users saying their products are better then iOS and Android.

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My Setup :P

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Get rid of TechofTomorrow (If you want to know why look up what he says to people that give him constructive criticism  )

On the PC Parts page try to get the Motherboard,  Graphics Card etc. lined up properly with the definitions on the right side of them.

Maybe change the website background and make your logo transparent as in so there isn't a black background around the logo as of now it is 2 different shades of gray/black that don't match at all.

Maybe a different title font something still interesting though so not Arial or Times New Roman. Try Comic Sans or Bookman Old Style maybe?

Also your Banner on the front page says "We have two goals, one is giving right information and two is destroying AMD fans boys." When you say that it isn't very clear if you're saying AMD sucks or you don't like fan boys.

It's also a bit hypocritical to have TechoTomorrow on your front page since he is more of a Red Team kind of guy.

Otherwise I like the site :) Have fun!

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Almost forgot to add please lose the shitty music please dear god almighty if you REALLY want music use what catman has when you view his profile I think it's our god is an awesome god or something

@ is his profile.

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But at least when Intel/Nvidia says they have the best, it's actually true. I don't see Windows/Blackberry users saying their products are better then iOS and Android.

That's effectively mild Intel/Nvidia fandom! Hypocritical!

Also, reduce the contrast of the text! People have said about fonts and music and layout etc, but I think that a light blue against dark blue (mild, calm , pastel greyish tones) would be a lot easier to read, and would add some style to your site.

Get rid of TechofTomorrow (If you want to know why look up what he says to people that give him constructive criticism )

On the PC Parts page try to get the Motherboard, Graphics Card etc. lined up properly with the definitions on the right side of them.

Maybe change the website background and make your logo transparent as in so there isn't a black background around the logo as of now it is 2 different shades of gray/black that don't match at all.

Maybe a different title font something still interesting though so not Arial or Times New Roman. Try Comic Sans or Bookman Old Style maybe?

Also your Banner on the front page says "We have two goals, one is giving right information and two is destroying AMD fans boys." When you say that it isn't very clear if you're saying AMD sucks or you don't like fan boys.

It's also a bit hypocritical to have TechoTomorrow on your front page since he is more of a Red Team kind of guy.

Otherwise I like the site :) Have fun!

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Almost forgot to add please lose the shitty music please dear god almighty if you REALLY want music use what catman has when you view his profile I think it's our god is an awesome god or something

@ is his profile.

I think Catman's music would just make it worse :/:P

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Get rid of fanboy stuff. It is unprofessional no matter what your views are.

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I think Catman's music would just make it worse :/  :P

Ya thats true lol.

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I'm not trying to be Professional lol

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Your HTML and CSS are not valid, see here and here.

The single biggest problem in communication is the illusion that it has taken place.

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I'm not trying to be Professional lol

Then why bother with this? No one wants to read information from someone who is a) unprofessional and B) hypocritical. First impressions are worth a lot and that banner didn't do much pulling me in, instead it pushed me away. Hard.

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Then why bother with this? No one wants to read information from someone who is a) unprofessional and B) hypocritical. First impressions are worth a lot and that banner didn't do much pulling me in, instead it pushed me away. Hard.

 

See you pushed him away with your banner... hard.

The single biggest problem in communication is the illusion that it has taken place.

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Get rid of TechofTomorrow (If you want to know why look up what he says to people that give him constructive criticism  )

Holy shit that guys a dick

http://forum.overclock3d.net/showthread.php?t=65190

Just read that..wow...

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I don't mind the individual matters, they brought usefull content and this what I'm about.

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