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I had to wright a 2 page Esay, any grammer/spelling mistakes? I dont know german that well.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l1Bop9IbhCJ1jKrEf24lgNyUPd9zXcKNIUAMJm9fPSQ/edit?usp=sharing

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Not so great if you ask me as a native speaker. I can basically spot a grammar mistake in every single sentence. But some people seem to be fixing it up for you as I type this.

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Not so great if you ask me as a native speaker. I can basically spot a grammar mistake in every single sentence. But some people seem to be fixing it up for you as I type this.

Yeah, see i dont really know german.

But my teacher does.

So its being fixed now.

Its really hard to write a 2 page essay in a language i dont know that well.

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Yeah, see i dont really know german.

But my teacher does.

So its being fixed now.

Its really hard to write a 2 page essay in a language i dont know that well.

 

Why do you have to write a 2 page essay in a language that you don't speak? Seems really odd to me.

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Oh boy, it's not even your fault^^ german is f*cked up.

If one does not fail at times, then one has not challenged himself.

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Why do you have to write a 2 page essay in a language that you don't speak? Seems really odd to me.

I mean, i take german, its just my previouse teahcers were not that good.

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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How do you ban somone from your doc?
@Tonylu STOP!

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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I mean, i take german, its just my previouse teahcers were not that good.

 

Well, german is a hard language, I know that, but I would still like to blame the (american?) educational system in some way or at least your previous teachers.

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Well, german is a hard language, I know that, but I would still like to blame the (american?) educational system in some way or at least your previous teachers.

American.

My first teacher was fine, but that was early german, second teacher was sick half the year and we just watched documentaries about germany in inglish or with subtitles. Now i actualy have a good teacher, but i dont know that much,.

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Damn^^ It's pretty fun to watch the doc change in real time :)

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American.

 

Okay, that explains it.

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Damn^^ It's pretty fun to watch the doc change in real time :)

its fun to have people fix it, then i can say yes or no to their edidts, and it changes it

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Well, german is a hard language, I know that, but I would still like to blame the (american?) educational system in some way or at least your previous teachers.

Teachers...

 

American.

My first teacher was fine, but that was early german, second teacher was sick half the year and we just watched documentaries about germany in inglish or with subtitles. Now i actualy have a good teacher, but i dont know that much,.

Same for me with English and a parallel calls with chemistry. We basically missed a year worth of classes, because the teacher was always sick.

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@FloRolf Check dis out

looked over it again.

Sounds pretty cool now if you ask me :P @spwath

I mostly changed it so not every sentence begins with "Er" or "Walter Gropius" because you wouldnt do that ^^ But i know how hard that is when you dont speak the language. I had the same with french ^^

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