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I'm trying to say Everyone has their own definition of success, but I have to keep it at 10 syllables 

 

So, does "Everyone has their own bias of success," make sense?

 
 
Or maybe this Everyone has their own bias to success ?
 
Can someone think of anything pls, ill send you 1 a dollar on paypal

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Each person's success is their own.

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Maybe 

Everyone has their own form of success

or

Everyone has their own style of success

Scratch that last one, 1 too many syls. 

Thanks thats perfect, Do you want to claim your 1 dollar prize :P

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Everyone has their own idea of success? 

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Didn't think I'd be spending my tuesday morning counting syllables with my fingers. 

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How about, "Everyone has a path to succession"?

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Everyone has their own idea of success? 

 

 

Each person's success is their own.

 

 

A bias is between multiple things.

 

Yoa can say:

.... biased idea of success. 

 

You are not using the word correctly.

 

 

"Meaning" is a two syllable word that means the same thing as "definition", if that helps...

Thanks but that doesn't fit the ten syllable criteria 

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syllables. Can't be more than 10, but if that weren't the case it's what I would use. 

It was 11 so I thought close enough...

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Success is as success does.

 

Accomplishment is a warm cucumber.

 

By virtue doth the vixen prosper!

 

Pretence is the mother of mundanity.

 

Volitant meum plenum est dolo et anguillas

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I'm trying to say Everyone has their own definition of success, but I have to keep it within 10 syllables 

 

So, does "Everyone has their own bias of success," make sense?

 
 
Or maybe this Everyone has their own bias to success ?
 
Can someone think of anything pls, ill send you 1 a dollar on paypal

 

Within 10 syllables? Your second sentence has 12 syllables...

Will provide a more suitable sentence in just a moment :)

 

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Success is as success does.

 

Accomplishment is a warm cucumber.

 

By virtue doth the vixen prosper!

 

Pretence is the mother of mundanity.

 

Volitant meum plenum est dolo et anguillas

I read that like 10 times, am I missing something

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Thanks but that doesn't fit the ten syllable criteria 

Mine had 8 syllables.

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COUNTING IS HARD :'(

Edited my post with a suitable sentence

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