802 [16+] [56K Warning]

[Jack.EXE]

Prequel Star Wars! Hiss! Hiss! Kill it now!

 

Comon, that's harsh.

 

The movies may not be the best, but the era is my favorite.

[Zeke]

I'll be honest, I don't know shit about SW, but the idea is very interesting!

[SeriouslyMikey]

Comon, that's harsh.

 

The movies may not be the best, but the era is my favorite.

 

As much as I respect your opinion. I can't accept the world that the prequels created as good. They contradicted many of the lore that was originally created in the original films. 

[Valkyrie Dare]

Prequel Star Wars! Hiss! Hiss! Kill it now!

Actually, while it does cover the clone wars, it will possibly take place during the time period of the original 3 episodes and most likely have some chapters taking place in the EU.

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As much as I respect your opinion. I can't accept the world that the prequels created as good. They contradicted many of the lore that was originally created in the original films. 

Midiclorians? I agree. but it's the easiest way to explain *Certain spoilers*

[SeriouslyMikey]

Midiclorians? I agree. but it's the easiest way to explain *Certain spoilers*

 

It wasn't covering anything up. It was merely adding to the "proficy" story line for Anikan/Darth Vader, which was unneeded. They had all they needed for creating a prequel story line and they ruined it. 

 

Anyway, I still think your idea is an interesting one. 

[Jack.EXE]

It wasn't covering anything up. It was merely adding to the "proficy" story line for Anikan/Darth Vader, which was unneeded. They had all they needed for creating a prequel story line and they ruined it. 

 

Anyway, I still think your idea is an interesting one. 

 

no, I mean spoilers within this story.

[SeriouslyMikey]

no, I mean spoilers within this story.

 

Ahhh, my mistake. 

[Valkyrie Dare]

"Jeffrey, come in! Come on, Jeffrey!" Trel whispered into her coms.

"Trel! What’s wrong?" Jeffrey asked, the screen flickering to life.

"Grievous is here, ambush!" she hissed.

"Get out of there, I'm calling for backup," he advised.

"Right, Trel out," she replied, flicking the screen off.

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Jeffrey was talking with master Yoda when Trel got back.

"Hmm, yes. Send a master, I will. Arrive soon, he should," Yoda said.

"Yessir, we will be waiting for his arrival," Jeffrey said.

The screen went dark and Jeffrey turned to Trel.

"Miss Astine-" He started.

"Trel, please," she replied.

"Trel then, can you fill me in on what happened?" Jeffrey asked.

"It was supposed to be simple, open the gate, flood the droid base with troops, take the planet... Grievous was there, almost like he was waiting for us," she said.

"Tell me about it." Lexi said sarcastically.

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Suddenly Lexi's com lit up, it's Grievous. He must have hacked into her com channel.

"You know what you stole. If you want to see your ~Sisters~ alive, you will return it." He holds up a gear stripped 48 for the com, and squeezes, causing her to shriek in pain.

Lexi was steaming.

When will this Jedi get here?

No more than 15 minutes later, a Delta-7 landed in the camp.

"Finally," Lexi sighed.

She was the first to greet him, and quickly ran him down on what happened.

"Alright. We're going to save them. If you want to come, you can.”

Lexi had to come, Grevious ticked a nerve. A big nerve. That girl he stripped and tortured was a 48. And her pod buddy no less.

"I'm in," she said.

"Anyone else?" Ty asked.

"I’m coming of course," Trel replied.

"Count us in," A few 42, 48, & 72s chimed in.

This was personal.

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The group of eight snuck in through the vents.

Lexi kept her scanner on. They had to find Grievous, and her sisters.

"Here," she whispered.

The Jedi instantly flicked his dual, yellow lightsabers on, cutting a hole in the vent faster than you could blink and slipped out of the hole.

He dropped down, and you could hear him slice through a B-2 guarding the girls.

The rest dropped down and began untying the survivors.

Lexi noticed that the girl grevious showed on the screen wasn’t here.

"He still has her," she said.

Trel knew exactly what she meant.

Trel ordered the clones to take the rescued members of the stealth squad back to camp.

Lexi got a feeling in her gut. He was coming.

It was just Trel, the other Jedi, and Lexi when Grievous arrived, and he threw the girl's unconscious body into the cell.

Her suit was torn to pieces, her face was cut, and her arms were covered in scratches.

This droid had to pay.

Lexi charged, tackling grevious before he could grab his lightsabers.

Trel pulled her own, as did the Jedi.

Grievous grabbed her with much force, causing cracks to form in her gear and then threw her away, knocking her out against the wall.

He pulled his lightsabers, and charged the older Jedi.

Who dodged the first blow, and cut a leg off.

Grievous was enraged, and continued to slash at the Jedi, who blocked blows repeatedly.

The Jedi smirked, he was winning.

Trel, however, knew what was coming.

Grievous separated his arms, and pulled two more lightsabers.

He would have killed the Jedi, if She didn’t jump in, blocking the blows with her lightsaber.

Lexi woke up, her head was sore, and she felt like her body was on fire.

She saw it.

It was a stalemate, and he was focused on the Jedi.

She pulled her blaster, and fired 6 shots, quite rapidly.

They struck home, taking out an arm.

The Jedi could win this now, she was sure.

She continued firing, and shots pinged off his chest. That didn’t work.

Grievous turned her attention to her, annoyed at her persistence.

She had to have it on her, he thought.

"Where is it?" he yelled.

She frankly did not know what he was talking about.

Trel threw her lightsaber, it missed!

Except it didn’t, it hit his leg on the return, cutting it off as well.

Grievous fell, and decided that he should book it.

Crawling on his hands like a spider, he was incredibly fast.

He broke line of sight, and you could hear a ship launch not 5 seconds later.

They ran over to Lexi, she must be hurt.

"That was both brave, and stupid, what you did back there," the older Jedi said. "Ty, by the way, the name's Ty."

"It worked, didn’t it?" Lexi joked.

He gently took off the crushed pieces, relieving the pressure on her, and slowly picked her up in his arms.

She couldn’t help but think how well sculpted he was. He wasn’t bulky, in fact, he was kind of slim, though tall.

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Ty and Trel make it back to the camp, where Jessy rushes Trel into the officer's tent, where she has a medic waiting.

"Infirmary is full," she said.

Ty let lexi down, and helped her gain her balance and they walked in to the tent.

The medic had stripped what was left of the clone's armor off and had covered her with decency bandages.

Ty had looked her over, she had multiple puncture wounds, and blood was everywhere.

She coughed, and blood came out of her mouth.

The bandages covering her were already soaked.

"Is she going to make it?" he asked.

"She has a chance," the medic replied.

"You sure?" Lexi asked.

The medic sighed and glanced away.

"No."

"Lexi, maybe it's best if you leave," Jessy said, her hand on Lexi's shoulder.

Lexi shook Jessy's hand off and sat by the girl, gently stroking her face

Her lips were trembling, she didn’t know what to say. This was her fault. Grievous wanted her, not this girl, and now this girl paid for it.

Hours passed in Lexi's mind.

When finally, the medic said, "It's over."

Lexi couldn’t contain herself.

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She was sobbing, cradling the corpse when Ty walked in from guarding the tent to check in.

He stood in shock.

"Alice," Lexi said, "Her name was Alice."

End chapter.

 

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Right, so I have good news and bad news.

 

The good: I'm on vacation with the family.

 

The bad: I really don't have the time to write for the next week, because of vacation with the family.

 

So chapter 5 will be a bit late.

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Just an update, still on vacation, but I managed to get a little written, so chap 5 should come out sometime by wednesday I hope.

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Just a little snippet of chap 5, sorry for the slow progress! we both got writer's block, and I got the PSAT comin up.

 

Jessy woke up in the middle of the night and looked around, Hex was back to his own bed, after spending a whole week in the infirmary, but no sign of Jeffrey.

She got up and walked outside, still no Jeffrey.
"Odd, he normally sleeps like a log." she said to herself.

 

She continued searching the camp, until she found him by the funeral pyre, standing in silence.
"We lost two hundred and fourty three good soldiers the past 4 days. We won the planet, at least for now, but at what cost?" he said, still facing the fires.
Jessy stood by his side, and opened her mouth for words of wisdom, but for the first time, no words came out.

"We're throwing lives at a robot army" he said grimly "We cant win this."
"If we dont, we lose even more." Jessy finally managed.

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Jessy woke up in the middle of the night and looked around, but no sign of Jeffrey.
Hex was back to his own bed, after spending a whole week in the infirmary.
She got up and walked outside, still no Jeffrey.
"Odd, he normally sleeps like a log." she said to herself

She continued searching the camp, until she found him by the funeral pyre, standing in silence.
"We lost two hundred and fourty three good soldiers the past 4 days. We won the planet, at least for now, but at what cost?" he said, still facing the fires.
Jessy stood by his side, and opened her mouth for words of wisdom, but for the first time, no words came out.
"We're throwing lives at a robot army" he said "We cant win this."
"If we dont, we lose even more." Jessy finally managed.
~~~~
Jessy woke up to the rumbling of a star destroyer landing outside of camp
"They'll be rounding us up in at least an hour" she assured herself
turning over and trying to go back to sleep
She had barely closed her eyes when Jeffrey grabbed her shoulder to wake her up
"Titan's landed" He told her
"I know" she answered, a tad annoyed.
~~~~
"Home sweet home" Hex exclaimed
It has been exactly 1 week since the beginning of OP:Dantooine
"Not quite, but Titan's closer than Kamino" Jefrrey jabbed.
The trio sat down in the lounge, when Bin and Bash stormed in
"You'll never guess the word of the day" Bash said
"Word on tne street is, that a 54 heard from a 42 who saw a 48 tell a 32 that she swears she saw a 72 move a ration brick." Bin said
"And this is significant because?" Jessy asked
"She never touched it." Bash said
"The rumor is, we all got implanted midiclorians at conception." Bin added
"We have to get tested." Bash continued

 

Just a snippet of chapter 5, we still have the other half to finish.

[Jack.EXE]

The good news is, We (@Valkyrie Dare & I) know what we're going to do for the rest of chap 5, just we dont have time to write it up today, and possibly tomorrow either.

(This SAT stuff is burning a lot of my time.)

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guys, I'm really so sorry this is taking so long, This SAT class is eating more time than I thought it would, and @Valkyrie Dare is starting college, so we don't have an awful lot of time.

 

that being said, I could really use some help in writing, even just paragraphs at a time.

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I'm currently working on re-writing 802 with better flow and a much greater level of detail.

 

Minor changes:

 

Hoth happens later in the story, for better continuity.

 

Lexi is now named Katt, for a bit more differentiation from Hex.

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Chapter 1 completely re-written, with much better continuity, much better descriptions of characters, and much higher level of detail.

 

we start similarly, but we skip right to dantoine.

 

Jeffrey woke up to Jessie sitting on his waist, her long black hair neatly brushed, and minty eyes staring at him, She had been waiting for him a while.
“You’re finally up, first mission today!” she said, sitting up. She was tall at 1.77 meters, her neat hair fell around her medium breasts. She slid off, and reached a hand out to Jeffrey go pull him up, who accepted the gesture.

 

 

A set of fingers rapped upon the wall next to them.

 

 

“Sorry to interrupt your moment,” said another female, whom the two turned to view. Katt, a red head with a tendency to flirt, jumped up on the bed as well. She could easily be described as sexy, with all the classic traits. Her red hair was pulled back into a ponytail, but a good few of her bangs stay free, She carries herself chest first, full of confidence, with a bust to match. Like Jessie, she was tall, though not as tall as Jessie herself, at 1.72 meters.

 

 

“So, When are we going on this mission?” Katt asked.
“Today, at about 0800, so I’d suggest loading up,” Jessie replied

Jeffrey got up and slid off the bunk, followed by the two girls. He was also tall, at 1.77, same as Jessie, much to Katt’s teasing. and the trio walked to their locker room. The barracks weren't designed for multi gender occupants, so many facilities never regarded such. They were bunk-mates, and shared 3 adjacent lockers.

“You’d think after what, 10 years of nudity in here I’d be comfortable? But I still have to cover my eyes when you change,” Jeffrey mentioned.
“I’d just consider it noble of you to respect our privacy,” Jessie said, pulling off her night robes and slipping into an undersuit.
“You can look now,” she added
Jeffrey changed as well, and Katt covered her eyes, screaming “The horror!” sarcastically.
“Shut up.” Jeffrey and Jessie said simultaneously.
They put on the special, black striped, phrik alloy armour, plastoid simply wouldn’t cut it for clones as valuable as the 802. Even the female armour had allowances for their chest.

 

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Hex was leaning against the wall, cleaning his XM-101V, an experimental burstfire rifle, based on an advancement of the DC-15 sidearm’s recharging cell and an attempt at a long barrel in a short package, placing the cell behind the trigger. He never spoke much, unless there was something that needed to be said.

When Jeffrey, Jessie, and Katt walked in, he nodded to them, and announced,
“Trel’s waiting in the bridge.”
“Thank you, Hex,” Jeffrey noted.
“Katt, why don't you go round up the stealth ops? Trel will want to see them,” Jessy added.
Katt nodded and darted off, surprisingly fast.

 

 

Jeffrey and Jessie entered the elevator, They’d have at least a minute to the bridge.
Jessie, deciding to start a conversation, asked,
“Excited for the mission?”
“Of course, not every day the 802 gets chosen,” He replied.
“We’ve never been chosen, today’s the first,” She teased.

 

 

The doors opened, and they stepped out onto the bridge. Clones were running all over in order to prepare for launch. Trel stood amidst all of this, her robes no different than the rest of the padawans, though she was almost of age, at 17. Unlike Jessie and Jeffrey, she wasn't super tall, at only 1.62 meters. She did however carry herself with pride, and had a great air of command around her. Her eyes were as brown as her shoulder length hair, which in turn matched her robes. At her hip was a lightsaber, which, when activated, had a golden blade, a symbol of a Sentinel, increasingly rare these days.

 

 

“Glad you could join us,” she said, noting their arrival.
“I’m Commander XTM-32-192, or Jeffrey. Whichever you see fit” Jeffrey chuckled
“And this is?” Trel asked
“Major XTF-33-192” Jessie said, taking off her helmet. “but I like to go by Jessie.”
“Jeffrey & Jessie” Trel said to herself, memorizing “alright. I heard this is your first mission?”
“Yes mam, I suppose you’d like to inspect the stealth ops yourself?” Jeffrey asked.
“I would very much like that.” Trel commented “Lead on, commander”

 

 

Jeffrey almost forgot, he’s a commander, equal in rank to the padawan. He fired up his comlink, and Katt appeared on the screen.

 

“Katt, you got Sigma rounded up?” he asked.

“Yeah, The jedi-,” Katt started.
“The jedi has a name,” Trel mentioned, “Trel.”
“Trel then, is sure to love them.” Katt finished.

 

 

On the way, they passed Hex, who nodded to them, and followed them three paces behind.
Hex was a brute of a clone designated XTM-16-066. He was officially a major, but his lack of talking cost him quite a few arguments with the other two majors, notably Jessie. Still, his powerful body more than makes up for this. He’s 1.74 Meters tall, with a lean, musclebound body, even his pectorals could be comparable to Trel’s own bust. He puts this body to good use, though, and can take more damage than most clones will dish out in a lifetime.

 

 

The group entered a locker room with twelve females sorting gear for the coming mission. Their attire resembled that of fatigues, with a white, low cut tank top, and black cargo pants. They snapped to attention when Katt gave the command.

 

 

“Hand picked by me out of Batch 72, all XTF class,” Katt said
“XTF?” Trel asked, hearing the term once before.
“eXperimental Trooper Female, 802 is the testing grounds for weapons, armour, and even genes,” Katt explained. “In short, we get all the goodies, including the goodies,” she said, gesturing her torso, drawing a short burst of laughter from Sigma.

 

“And XTM would be male, correct?” Trel asked, just to be sure.
“Bingo,” Jeffrey answered.

 

“Do you all have names?” Trel asked.

The girls nodded yes, and Katt gave out the nicknames.
“XTF-72-101 Nat, XTF-72-088 Kristy, XTF-72-048 Sam, XTF-72-072 Dubs” She began, mouth drying from all the numbers.
“Speed, Jackie, Meadow, Risky, Cassie, Emma, Drew, and finally Alice,” She finished.

 

 

Trel looked them all up and down, noting their physical features, as well as their personality shown through stance. She’s good at this kind of thing. They were the same height as Trel, 1.62 Meters, but while She was lean and musclebound, the 12 had curvier figures, with more powerful legs, and a thicker torso, with a fuller chest. They all shared long cut, blonde hair, with icy blue eyes, and a caring oval face. They were definitely built for stealth, she thought.

 

 

“Check your gear, we’re landing in an hour” Trel said.

 

Bin & Bash appear later, don't worry

[Jack.EXE]

We're completely re-writing 802 from the beginning, same character arc, just much better flow, Level of detail, and attention to detail.

 

We're not going to be relying on any pictures to explain how something looks, we will be describing it in full, even the ladies' breasts and Hex's pecs.

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“Fifteen minutes until gunship launch, all landing personnel to the hangar,” the woman on the intercom announced, but Jeffrey and the others were already loaded up by this time.

 

 

Landing went uneventfully, with hardly a problem.
“I dont like it, aren't they supposed to be shooting at us?” Hex grumbled.
“Be thankful they aren't,” Jessie retorted
“They can't see us yet, we’re landing outside their radar,” the pilot explained.
“Landing in 2 minutes,” He added.

 

 

As soon as they landed, Jeffrey gave the order to pitch the tents and set up camp. Quickly, numerous 12 man tents went up, along with long medical shelters and a mess hall.
Jeffrey Jessie, Hex, and Trell had a tent to themselves, and they set up what belongings they had in it.

 

 

Hours passed with the troops preparing for the combat they were sure to face the next day, and it quickly became night. The members of the officer’s tent were wearing their night robes, discussing tomorrow’s plan when Katt walked in.

“Hope I'm not intruding on anything,” She said.
“It’s fine,” Trel replied, “We were just discussing tomorrow’s plan.”
“We’re going to take the planet back, and restore a much needed crystal supply to the Jedi,” Jeffrey filled her in.
“Bin ‘n’ Bash brought some coffee, if you’re interested,” Katt offered.
Bash, along with Bin, his closest numerical brother, were Katt’s closest lieutenants
“Why not?” Jeffrey laughed, “I could use a cup.”
The two stumbled in, with at least 4 pots each.

Bash, like his brother, was a medium sized clone, 1.68 meters tall, with blue eyes, brown hair in a surfer dude cut, and mild muscles.
The group talked for hours before finally Katt, Bin and bash left, and the group settled in for bed.

 

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The next morning Jeffrey and Trel stood up and addressed the legion, and gave everyone the run-down.
“Trel will be sneaking in with Sigma, and they’ll open the gates for us, we’ll then storm the fort,” Jeffrey cheerfully said. “Simple enough?”
“Just remember, stay safe. We’re the best the GAR has to offer, and I’d hate to lose any of you,” He continued.

 

 

Trel and the girls from Sigma donned their charcoal grey, digital camo stealth gear, and activated their cloaking fields. The group moved off, shifting through the tall, dry grass.

“They only have 28 minutes to complete their part and get out, prepare the troops for battle,” Jeffrey said to Hex & Jessie, who both replied with a nod, followed by jogging off to the armoury.

 

~~~~

 

 

Katt was ecstatic, the 802’s first mission, her first mission. She had been waiting for 10 years for this day. She practically flew to her tent, and donned her set of armour. Trained as a tech specialist, she could operate any radio, hack any computer, or even re-program droids, or at least she liked to think, she hadn't ever really tried it yet. Nonetheless, her skills were admirable, and she wore the tech gear to prove it, with a long range antenna on her right shoulder, and an HKR touch computer on her left wrist, affectionately called the Hacker’s toolkit.

 

She patted the 802 painted on the left breastplate for good luck, grabbed her XM-101V, and set off for the front lines.

“Glad you could join us, captain,” Bash said.
“Thanks, has Jeffrey given the order to move out yet?” Kat asked.
“Obviously not,” Bin answered.

 

~~~~

 

Jeffrey was getting antsy, Trel hadn't called back with any news of success yet, he looked at the time, it had been 44 minutes since Trel had left.

“Alright, we’re moving out, time to get to the front lines” Jeffrey said to Jessie.
“On it,” She replied.

She hopped off of the lookout tower, landing with such finesse Jeffrey couldn't help but stare. Jeffrey pulled up his comlink and called the captains.
“Get the troops on the move,” Jeffrey ordered.
“Yessir,” the group replied.

 

He took a deep breath in, and tried to relax for the battle to come.
He walked down the stairs, last thing he needs to do right now is to try to one up Jessie and break something.

 

~~~~

 

Katt gave the order to move out, and they began their march towards the CIS garrison.
“How boring,” She thought. She decided to strike up a conversation with a girl beside her.
“Any guesses on what’s going on with the enemy right now?” She asked.
“Cant be good, Commander said they only had 28 minutes to complete the mission before the stealth fields run out,” The clone said grimly “It’s been 48.”
“I sure hope they’re alright, I hand picked them, you know, Sigma,” Katt added.
“We can only hope, 72’s a good lookin’ batch, ya know?” The girl said.
“And which batch are you?” Katt asked, “And I’m Katt, by the way, a 48.”
“I’m from 63. You know, pale, brown hair, grey eyes,” She said. “The name’s Abby.”
“Right, gotcha. I’m so nervous right now, with the first mission and all,” Katt confessed.
“We all are, every one of us,” Abby reassured her, “You just gotta keep that feeling down though, and focus on the fight ahead.”

 

Just as she said this, they came over the hill and saw the CIS base, a low structure with thick walls and swarming with droids. Katt’s comlink sprang to life, and a clear picture of Jeffrey came into view.
“Hold off for a minute, stay low, and don't get spotted,” He told the captains, “Katt, what do you see?”
She peered off into the camp, but to no luck, the walls were tall enough to block the view.
“Nothing, the same as you,” She replied.
These call outs went on with the captains, until all 16 had given their views.
“Great, we’re going in blind then, be on your guard, there can be anything in there. Stay safe,” He finished.

 

The line surged forward, clones poured into the swarm of droids, and initially began to overwhelm them.

 

 

“Don't gotta worry ‘bout running out, just keep from overheating the cell,” Katt thought to herself, “Line up the shot, fire, move on.”

This pattern continued for what felt like hours, until Katt realized she was alone and surrounded.

Her allies had been pushed back.

 

“Stand down, Jedi,” A droid said.
Jedi? She was no jedi, she was a clone. They obviously hadn't seen a female clone before.
She could use this to her advantage.

She dropped her blaster.

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Here's a complete, uninterrupted version of the updated story.

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“This is unit 1080, come in command, we have a captured jedi,” the droid said. Katt could hear the voices of nearby droids questioning this phrase. “Is it a jedi?” “Can’t be a jedi, wearing clone armour.” She could hear a solid thwack of a B1 hitting another “Clones aren't female, must be jedi.” A B2 grabbed her by the arms and pinned them behind her back, forcing her to kneel on the ground.

General Grievous himself answered, and the droid called 1080 put the comlink into Katt’s face.

“Aaaaaah, very clever jedi, very clever, wearing clone armour to fool our droids. Shame you forgot to suppress such obvious features,” He taunted.

“Obvious features, you mean these ol’ things?” Katt joked, gesturing hair and breast, “And you must be grievous, the cyborg. Shame you lost your body in the accident, I bet you had all the ladies going after you.”

This was not an insult Grievous had heard before, his eyes narrowed and his hands clenched. Katt could see this, if she could keep this banter up, Trel might be able to win this.

“Trade-offs were made, but now I’m a force even jedi fear!” He said.

“Oh really” Katt said “Do I look afraid?” she asked a nearby droid.

“Uhhh, no?” A droid said, followed by a solid thwack of his head.

“Tell me, where is your lightsaber, jedi?” Grievous asked.

“Crap, he’s onto me,” Katt thought.

“Well?” Grievous continued.

“Lost it,” Katt said, slightly panicked.

A large explosion can be heard through the comlink, followed by a familiar voice. It was Trel!

“Saved by the bell,” Katt thought

“You are wasting my time, you are no jedi! dispose of her!” Grievous yelled, turning away to deal with the new threat, Katt could see the comlink fall to the ground and shatter as Grievous pulled his lightsabers.

“Hold her still so I can get a clean shot, we’re low on ammo.” The droid commanded, lining up a shot. Katt was in a panic, she was about to die, she knew. her mind began racing with all the things she was sorry for, all the things she should have done, shouldnt have, never got the chance to do. She prepared for the end, but it never came. The droid slipped, and hit the B2 who was holding her square in the head.

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Jeffrey was in the middle of planning the next attack when Katt stumbled in the tent and fell onto his bed.

“Grievous. He’s here. On Dantooine,” she huffed, panting. She had obviously ran all the way here.

“What happened to you?” Jeffrey asked.

“Got captured, stalled a bit, almost got executed, and insulted Grievous,” She answered, face buried in his pillow. “Can I, just take a nap for a bit?” she asked, already stripping off her gear.

Jeffrey facepalmed, “Why not?” He laughed, turning back to his work

“You sure you can sleep with me talking on the comlink?” he asked, turning back around.

Katt was already fast asleep, with her armour stacked neatly to the side of the bed & the bodyglove folded on top. How she does that he’ll never know.

He continued to try to contact Trel, to no avail.

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Trel finally had limped back to the camp with Meadow at her side, They felt like every bone in their body was broken, and they were at least half right. They collapsed in front of the gate, their armour was, for the most part, missing, their undersuits in shreds.

They laid there for what felt like hours before a familiar voice called to them, Jessie had taken notice whilst taking her rounds.

Trel could feel herself being loaded onto a stretcher. For all she cares, she’s home.

~~~~

“Jeffrey, Trel’s back,” Jessie said, bursting into the tent, “She’s in the infirmary.”

Jeffrey shot up out of his chair, and tossed his biscuit at Katt to wake her up, who shot up on impact.

“Trel’s back!” he said, rushing out of the tent.

Katt pursued Jeffrey, not even bothering to dress, she ran off for the infirmary.

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Hex was sitting with trel when the trio walked in. “Medic says she’ll be fine, she’s got a broken leg, and 4 cracked ribs, but nothing that will take too long to heal,” he said.

Trel soon woke, and Jeffrey was the first to speak.

“What happened in there?” He asked.

“It was a trap, Grievous was there, he cut six of us down before I could even react, me and Meads over there barely escaped,” Trel responded.

“No kidding, I just traded insults with the droid himself about 2 hours ago” Katt said.

Katt’s comlink suddenly lit up with a blurry image of General Grievous, which soon came into focus.

“Oh I’m sorry, Did I interrupt something?” He teased

“What the hell do you want?” Jeffrey asked.

“I offer a trade…” He said, pulling a clone into view. He had stripped her of her gear, and the body glove was in shreds, revealing deep gashes all along her body, and blood flowed slowly down her face, matting her blonde hair

Katt gasped, “Alice!” she screamed.

Grievous brushed the girls’ hair out of her face

“Return what you took and I’ll return your sisters. If you hurry, some of them might even be alive,” He said, “Say hi, Alice” He squeezed his hand, digging the claws into her body triggering shrieks of pain.

“You have 5 hours” He said, hanging up.

“Katt, call yoda, we need another jedi here, NOW.” Jeffrey ordered.

[Jack.EXE]

Katt had barely reached the commander's tent when she slipped on the HKR unit and punched in the command to call yoda.

 

“Yoda, this is,” He answered, “Ah, Miss Katt, What troubles you?”

“Grievous is here, he’s taken clone hostages, Trel’s out of commission, and the world is pretty messed up in general. We need another Jedi here, like in an hour,” She replied.
“Hmmmm, Yes. Send another jedi, I will. One sector out, he is,” Yoda said.
“Thank goodness, I’ll be waiting for him,” Katt said, relieved.
Katt was just about to flick off the screen, when Yoda stopped her.
“And Katt,” Yoda said “Clothe yourself, you should. Wish to see you naked, I do not”
Katt realized that she hadn't dressed herself when she woke up to go see Trel in the infirmary.
“Right, Sorry,” Katt said, covering up, “It’s a long story, I’ll have to explain it later.”

 

The screen flickered off. Time to wait for this new jedi. She walked outside, after equipping the bodyglove and the lower half of her armour. No use wearing uncomfortable plates if all she was doing was waiting.

 

After walking to the landing bay, Katt propped herself up on some crates and took a half awake nap.

 

~~~~

 

“Sentinel Ty, desperately need your help, a clone legion does. On Dantooine, they are. Found Grievous, they have.” Yoda said over the communicator in Ty’s Delta-7.
“Dantooine, That would be the 802, Trel’s assignment?” He asked.
“Injured she is, Take over, you must.” Yoda answered.
“On my way.” Ty said.

Ty never trusted clones, He didn't know why, but the particulars of their creation upset him. An order placed 11 years ago by a man who was dead for 13? It had to be bad news. Nonetheless, Yoda trusts him to take control of the legion, and if possible take down Grievous.

 

He made the jump to hyperspace, and reached dantooine within an hour. Scanning for the base, He felt different, almost relaxed.
“Found it,” He said, coming in for a landing.

 

As soon as he touched ground, he looked at the surrounding area, and noticed the booted feet of a nearby clone, lying behind a couple of crates.
“He’s probably taking a nap, beating the sun, that’s for sure.” He thought. Ty walked over to ask where the commander is, and as soon as he rounded the corner, he was in for a shock. This half dressed clone was female.
“Ahem” he cleared his throat. The clone opened her eyes and got up, brushing dust off her chest.
“I’m Ty, and I’m looking for Trel?” He asked.
“Oh, Right, Yoda said you’d be coming, I’m Katt, by the way.” She replied.
“I take it, you’ve never seen a female clone before, huh?” Katt asked, noting his look of shock.
Ty hadn’t. Still, apart from gender, there was something different about her, than the other clones he’d been with.
“No, I haven’t,” Ty said “You’ll have to explain how that came about, later. In the meantime, where’s your commanding officer?”
“Well, Trel’s in the infirmary, but Jeffrey’s over towards the middle of the camp, planning the next move as always. I’ll tell you, you cant beat him in holochess,” Katt answered.
“Thanks” Ty said, putting his hand out to shake.
She accepted, and He walked off for the middle of the camp.

 

~~~~

 

Jeffrey was laboring over the holoboard fine tuning every detail of the battle when Ty walked in. “You must be Ty,” He said, not turning around. “As you probably know, Grievous is here & Trel’s in the infirmary.”
“Yoda told me on the way” Ty answered
“What you don't know, is Grevious has taken six of our finest hostage. We need your help to get them out.” He grimly spoke.
“Speaking of your, Erm men, What’s up with-” Ty Started
“Their Genders?” Jeffrey asked “I get that alot, the 802 is the genetic testing grounds, along with experimental equipment. Simply, 80 talented, well shaped, and strong men and women each contributed genes, yielding 200 clones each for evaluation, after Jango Fett died.”
“Easy enough to understand,” Ty laughed “So, you got a game plan, or you leave that to me?”
“I do, though it’s crude, I’m relying on what Trel had told me when we found her in the fields outside.” Jeffrey answered “I’m not risking any more of my men’s lives on Grievous, If you’re taking anyone, It’s me.”
“Don't think you can count ME out, Grievous has one of MY squads hostage, and I’M going to be there to personally rip his claws off.” Katt said, surprising the two with her sudden appearance.
“Any other volunteers?” Jeffrey sarcastically exclaimed, as only the three were in the tent.
“Let’s gear up before more show up.” Ty said, to Jeffrey’s approval.

 

They both wore a DC-15s blaster at the hip, and armed themselves with a sword of phrik alloy, able to deflect even lightsabers.

TY wore his normal outfit, of a clone chestplate, a trench coat, cargo pants, and a pair of thick black boots. His brown hair was messy as ever, and his lightsabers hid beneath the coat. Jeffrey imagined they’d be yellow, as Ty was a sentinel, like Trel.

 

“Alright, All geared up and ready to go” Jeffrey said, helping Katt tighten her breastplate.

 

The group set out in a TX-130P, a light tank, with a 12 passenger mod.

 

When they arrived, Ty cut into a vent, and told the two “Wait with the tank, We’ll need a quick getaway if we still have any alive.”

Ty crawled into the vent, and a shroud of darkness covered him from view.

 

~~~~

 

Katt was anxiously waiting for him to come right back out with the girls, a simple extraction op, this should be. “I’m going in after him” She said, much to Jeffrey’s disdain, and got up to get out.
He grabbed her arm, “It’s only been 15 minutes.” He assured her, “He’ll call us if he needs help.”
“He could be dead already.” She exclaimed, “I’m going in after him.”

 

She shook his arm and exited the tank, grabbing the phrik saber on the way out.

 

sorry for taking so long, school's started and it's taking up all my time.