802 [16+] [56K Warning]

[Jack.EXE]

 

a long time ago, on an obscure star wars forum, an idea started, the 802nd clone legion, this idea never advanced beyond that forum, however, and died out after a couple years (RIP 802, 2007-2010).

 

I'm going to attempt to revive it, and move it from the fanon to the EU (expanded universe).

 

I'm writing a story.

 

As you may or may not know, I get horrible writer's block, so I cant do this alone.

 

 

 

the basic lore for 802 is:

 

Experimental clone testing (clones of men and women other than Jango Fett, 80 of them specifically, with 200 clones per donor)

 

Black markings, standard kama, and 802 printed on the left breastplate of the armour, and tattooed above the left nipple as well.

 

Also called BETA class arcs, as they share many traits with the ARCs (independent thinking, above average strength)

 

Out of the 16,000 clones in 802, 4000 (yay, more gender options than just one!), belonging to batches 4, 7, 9, 12, 14, 19, 22, 26, 29, 33, 38, 42, 45, 48, 54, 56, 63, 68, 72, & 79

 

Deserted during order 66, thanks to their ARC-like independence

 

 

 

Anyway, the story is spanning all the way from just after episode 2, to episode 4, and I could use your help coming up with:

 

Characters (note, you can "claim" characters a batch at a time, and you get to decide what the batch looks like. I have claims on 16, 32, 33, 48, & 64)

 

short stories ( the idea of 802 is much larger than any 1 fanon character, it's an entire fanon army, anyone can add to it, as long as it does not contradict the existing lore)

 

pictures (scenery, characters, equipment, nothing is out of bounds!)

 

 

I'll write what I can, but 802 is simply too large for one man to wright.

 

 

if you want, think of it as Star wars roleplay.

[Jack.EXE]

reserved for pictures drawn by me, or submitted by you!

 

pictures here will be limited to 1024x1024, however the origonal picture will be linked under it.

 

 

http://linustechtips.com/main/topic/185589-802-star-wars-possible-56k-warning-possible-nsfw-content/?p=2495957

 

http://linustechtips.com/main/topic/185589-802-star-wars-possible-56k-warning-possible-nsfw-content/?p=2498088

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A long, drawn out ‘good morning’! wakes Jeffrey, only to find Jessy, his second in command, sitting on his waist.
"Aren't you excited? Today's the 802's first mission! Time to prove ourselves!" she shouts.
"More like terrified. Sure, we've posted high marks in training, but that's training. The clones that came back from Geonosis, it was like a living hell." Jeffrey replies grimly.
Hex, overhearing the conversation, gumbles, "Terrified or not, you've got a job to do, just like us."

 

 

"You guys filmin' a pornography over there or something? I want in!" Lexi, the bunk's flirt, crackles, sarcasm dripping from her tone.
Jeffrey and Jessy suddenly realize their positioning, and hastily got off each other.

 

 

After a few minutes of taunting, Bin, the lieutenant under Lexi, walks in with a bundle of rations.
"You all missed breakfast, you're lucky I've got such a kind heart as to bring some of... whatever this stuff is, back." he says.
"Thanks for the grub, but where's Bash? Aren't you together wherever you go?" Lexi inquires as she takes a bread roll and devours it.
"The idiot got his foot stuck in the trash, after I dared him to kick it. Well, more like ordered him to. Some poor chap from the 501st is helping him" Bin smirked.

 

 

That moment, Bash stumbled in, fuming. After a few moments of nasty glares, he growled "Ha ha, very funny. Now, any idea we’re we are going?"
"Intel picked up a distress call on a distant ice planet called Hoth, in the Anoath sector." Jessy responded.
"That's uncharted territory, or so we thought. We're going in blind either way." Jeffrey added.
"Great, now, how many are they sending?" Lexi asked doubtfully.
"Unfortunately, We don’t have the same option that our brothers had on geonosis, the legion is getting split up over the whole system, us six are searching a 100 kilometer squared area towards the south of the planet." Jeffrey said.
Everyone cringed at the thought of it.

"Anyway, relax, prepare, shower, whatever you do to get ready, just be in the hangar in 5 hours."

 

 

...

 

 

 

Nothing ever goes right the first time.

As the ship approached it’s target, it lurch violently, causing Jessy to slip, knock over Jeffrey, and fall out along with him, hitting the ground quite hard.
The ship carried on for another 20 Kilometers before finally, and literally, crashing to a stop, sending Hex flying.

 

 

 

Lexi, Bin and Bash got out of the crashed ship, salvaged whatever supplies they could, and attempted to contact the others, but to no avail. No reply from Hex, and Jeffrey's signal was cut off from one of the powerful ice storms of Hoth.

 

 

Jeffrey tried to re-establish contact, but the ice storm was not a good place for wireless signals to travel.
"This is unit B-32-192 and B-33-192, critical emergency. Our ship has crashed, and we have been separated from the rest of the legion. Come in, anyone? Our armour is compromised, we're going to freeze!" Jeffrey frustratingly yelled at the communications device.
“Lexi, Hex, Bin, Bash, come in? Jessy's with me. Anyone?"
"Looks like we're on our own. We better find shelter.” Jessy commented, noting his attempt at making contact.

 

 

While their armour was shot, they were uninjured; The armour took the blow of landing, preventing any major injuries.
They trudged on, with no idea what direction they were heading or where they were going. All they cared about was finding shelter and getting of the cold.
After walking half a mile or so, Jeffery sunk to the ground and began to dig.
"The snow here's deep enough to dig a small cave, to get the wind off our backs." Jeffrey explained as Jessy looked at him quizzically. She joined in to help after she realized she was colder than she thought.

 

 

Soon they were under the packed snow, with just enough room to sit up.
Still cold, Jeffrey began looking through what was left of his pack. A single ration brick. Dammit.
"We're doomed, nothing for heat here. Lost the sleeping pack in the crash." Jeffrey noted grimly.
Their training was useless here, there was nothing for warmth in knowledge, Jessy thought. It was time for a crazy idea, something that just might work.
Jessy's gears began to turn, and she had just that, a crazy idea. She took off the top half of her undersuit, exposing her torso, to which Jeffrey shouted, "What the hell are you doing! That won’t-oh"
She slipped the top on over Jeffrey, and slipped in with him.
"Always said these things could stretch to fit a whole bed, see? Make-shift sleeping bag." she replied.
She wrapped her arms around him, and he did the same, huddling like penguini.
Breathing as one, It felt like days passing through those hours. Time in that cave felt timeless to them, and just as they blacked out, the cave collapsed.

 

 

….

 

 

 

Hex, landed so hard, he was sure he broke his leg. He didn't care, however, he had to find the others, broken leg or not.

 

 

Lexi, Bin, and Bash looked over the ship after contact was lost.
"Unflyable, it won’t even start. Wings have been warped and onboard computers are broken to bits" Bash said.
"Well duh, did you see what hit the ship?" Lexi replied like that was the most obvious thing in the world.
"It wasn't a missile, and definitely not droids" Bin commented, as he discovered what had pierced the metal hull of the gunship
"It's quite a large rock. We're definitely not alone out here." Bash stated.
"I'm going to look for the others, stay here and keep your beacons live." Lexi said, as she walked off in Hex's direction, carrying a gun at her hip.

 

 

A few hours later, she found him-beaten, bruised, and limping, with possibly even more scars than before.
"What have you gotten into?" Lexi asked, observing his condition.
"There's beasts here, they are incredibly strong, I swear I saw one pick up a boulder like it was paper." Hex replied.
"There's one hunk of rock in the ship, those beasts must have knocked us down." She commented.
"Come on, we gotta go find our favourite couple."
"They're not a couple, you and I both know that." he replied calmly.
"You know what I saw, too. They even shower together, I've got it on camera!" Lexi argued, drawn in by her favorite topic.
"You forget, she was clothed, and he was covered in sludge. YOU pushed him in it in the first place!" Hex laughed.
"Fine, one day though, they'll be togeth--" She said as she sunk into the deep snow.
Lexi's foot fell a bit deeper than she thought it would, and Hex’s scanning device picked up something.
"Two life forms, though faint." he noted.
"Beasts?" She asked, drawing her gun.
"No, dig below you." he replied.

 

 

They began to dig, and uncovered their commanding officers, practically cuddling.
"See? I told you they're a couple!" Lexi exclaimed.
"Clever, they used the fabric from their tops as a make-shift sleeping bag, probably saving their lives." Hex observed, ignoring Lexi.
"Oh dear, they're freezing though, we gotta get them back. Don't separate them, you got a blanket or something?" Lexi asked, trying to get them out of the small layer of ice that covered them while they were in the cave.
Hex looked through his pack, discovering a body-bag.
"They're not dead, but this should work just fine." he said, as he slipped the bag over them, and picking up." he said.

 

 

 

Jeffrey woke up shortly after Jessy, to have bin and bash staring at them, and Lexi started probing them with questions of the sexual nature, claiming she caught them sleeping together.
"Will you cut it out? What help does that do?" Jessy snapped.
"Fine." Lexi sighed, and she sat down.

 

 

...

 

 

 

A few more hours passed, not much was said. Hex got ahold of the mothership, and told them of their coordinates.
Ten hours after the start of the mission on the planet Hoth, a rescue ship arrived

“Glad we're finally out of that hellpit! Damn, this is a volcano in comparison to Hoth." Bash exclaimed.
"Did the legion find the source of the call on Hoth?" Jeffrey asked.
"Yes, we did." a voice said dully, as a clone in a wheelchair entered.
It was 43-099, Skyballs, a nickname earned by working with weather and his defect.
Lexi, leaning on the wall, previously letting her mind wander, looked him up and down. After a new seconds, she introduced him.
"Head of intelligence" she explained.
"A pleasure to meet you," Jeffrey said, lifting his hand to shake. "Who was the call from?"
"A lost bounty hunter's ship. However, the pilot was nowhere to be found." Skyballs said.
Jessy got up. "I'm going to check on Hex. It took a lot of persuasion to get him to check in to the infirmary, despite the broken femur and all."
As she was walking out the door, she tossed her head back and said "Send for me when we're within 20 minutes of Kamino."
Lexi, looking at the remains of Jessy's armor, commented "I'm sure you enjoy her new look."
"Enough, Lexi" Jeffrey growled "It was only a couple hours and we were cold, you said we were covered in ice when you found us. First thing I'm doing back at Kamino is getting our armor replacements" Jeffrey said as he made his way to the door
"Remember to cover her breasts!" Lexi teased as Jeffrey opened the door, causing him to throw the hunk of plastoid armor that he was holding at her.
"I tripped a nerve, didn’t I?" Lexi mused, staring at the hunk of plastoid thrown so hard it dug into the wall behind her.
"Guys generally don’t like it when you say they have a crush on someone." Bin commented.

...

Jessy was looking over Hex's leg when a clone wearing fire gear walked in.
"Jeffrey sent you?" Jessy asked, looking up from Hex.
"No, Bash. He said Jeff's steaming right now." The clone replied.
"Emma, right?" Jessy questioned.
"Correct. By the way, we're approximately 15 minutes from eyeshot of Kamino."
"Great, now I can finally get out of this infirmary." Hex said from his bed.
"And back into another. You broke your leg, and the doctor droid suspects a few ribs too. This will take at least a week to heal" Jessy smirked.

...

Jessy couldn’t sleep. Her mind was racing. She looked at her clock - it read 1:24. She'd been lying awake for at least three hours. She had practically stripped back on hoth. Sure, she only ditched the top, and it saved their lives, but she would never forget the feeling of lying with someone, breathing in tandem, heartbeats in their arms. She turned over, giving up trying to sleep, and leaned over her bunk, tapping Jeffrey's shoulder, waking him.
"I'm cold." she whispered, inviting him onto her bed.
"What?" he asked.
"It wasn’t like me, to do that." she answered vaguely.
"Oh, the cave? Think nothing of it, you saved our lives." He said, attempting to comfort her. "You had to, or else you'd be dead."
"I'm trying to, but I still can't sleep. It's bothering the crap out of me." she complained.
"Well, change the subject." Jeffrey said, for his or her sake, he didn’t know. "I wonder what it would be like to be a farmer..."

…

Lexi woke up to find Jeffrey's bed empty, and upon further inspection, she found Jessy's bed deserted as well, though it was evident that the latter had more use in her devious tactics. She found them in the Mess hall, partaking in early breakfast, which Jeffrey normally avoids.
"So, how was Jessy's Bed?" she jabbed, as she sat down next to Jessy and Jeffrey.
"Amazing!" Jeffrey laughed, shocking Lexi.
"I'm kidding" he added, noting her reaction. "How was Hex's?"
"You saw?" Lexi said, continuing the gag. Everyone knew Hex was still in the infirmary, so no one really paid attention. Plus, this was Lexi talking.

…

Jeffrey and Jessy found Lexi on the water training deck, swimming. Who knows how long they have back home? She had a habit of wearing that modified undersuit in there, but it showed quite a bit of skin.
"Lexi, we got another mission." Jeffrey shouted.
She pulled herself up out of the pool and took the towel Jessy tossed to her, slipping off the wet suit under it.
"Where?" she asked.
"Be somewhere warm, please." she added.

...

Back at the bunk, Lexi flopped her naked, sopping body onto Bin and threw her equally wet towel onto Bash, soaking them both to wake them.
"I take it we've got another mission" they said in unison.

Lexi was bouncing up and down on bin, yelling at him to get up, when the Jedi Padawan, Trel Astine, walked in.
"I'm looking for the command-" she stops, noticing Lexi's antics. She turns around, noticing the Jedi's presence, and quickly covers her breasts and grins sheepishly.
"I'm looking for the commander." Trel finished, casting a questioning stare at Lexi.
"That would be me." Jeffrey said "My name is Jeffery, B-32-192. I see you've already met Lexi." he smirked as he glanced at the team's captain.
Lexi got up and put on a long tank top resembling a dress that Jessy had tossed her.
"And this is Jessy, my second in command" he added, gesturing to her with his hand.
"I see," Trel said. "And the two soaked by - Lexi, are...?"
"Bin and Bash. They do everything together, practically liked twins." Jeffrey replied.
"Now that that's over with, I take it you have a squad ready for covert ops?” she asked.
"Yessir, right this way" Jeffrey said, turning attentive as he walked out the door, motioning for Lexi and Trel to come along.

They walked in a locker room, where twelve female clones were preparing their armor suits. There were all wearing white tank tops with black undersuit bottoms, showing off their '802' tattoo and serial numbers. They belonged to batches 42, 48, and 72.
They snapped to attention when the clones and Jedi walked in.
"Very nice" Trel mused "How's their stealth?"
"Top notch" Jeffrey boasted, waving towards the clones. "Hand picked by elite analyzers."
"Female clones, I've noticed. Care to explain how that came about?" Trel asked, her eyebrows raised. "We're the experimental units for weapons, materials, gear, and even DNA." Lexi explained.
"In short, we get all the goodies, including the extra goodies." she smirked, gesturing to her chest.
"I see. Anyhow, you got the mission packet, correct?" Trel asked, frowning.
"Of course. I'm leading a diversion, while you take this squad and sneak in." Jeffrey said.
"Good. We meet in half an hour on the loading bay. Prepare suit up, we're going to Dantooine" she said.

 

 

 

 

Hex woke up to the sound of clone's boots thumping on the ground as they ran by the infirmary. With some effort, he got up and looked out the window. 802 troops. “They must be heading to the loading bay,” he thought. Luckily, the medical droid wasn't there, so he slipped out and grabbed his gear from the bunkers.
He was walking down the hall with a group of clones when Lexi, coming the other direction, bumped in to him. She immediately grabbed his chestplate and began dragging him back towards the infirmary
"Nope." She growled, pushing him back into the facility. Hex was tough, but Lexi was strong, more than average. It was likely the swimming, there was no keeping her out of the water. No matter, he'd just try again once she leaves.
"I was coming to say bye, and here you are trying to leave." she said, shaking her head. "Well, now you're not getting that kiss I was going to give you." she added sarcastically as she left the room and headed back to the bay. Hex knew couldn't be so messy in his escape next time. He slipped out again, this time staying out of sight. If he got found this time, and he'd probably never get on the ship. When he got down to the loading bay, he stayed out of sight for a while, and then snuck onto the ship while the crew was loading supplies.

 

 

It was not until halfway to Dantooine when he was found.

"You just don't take a no to these things, do you?" Trel sighed, hoping an injured soldier wouldn't slow them down.
"He's stubborn." Lexi said as she grabbed him and tied him to a wheelchair. "You can come with us, but you're not going into any of the action." she scolded. All the while, Jeffery was shaking his head and laughing at Hex's everlasting resilience.

 

 

...

 

 

They managed to land uneventfully, and Jeffrey gave the command to set up camp. Tents and fold-able mobile stations were pitched and set up, with 12 clones to a facility. Jeffrey, Jessy, and Hex had their own tent, but the Medical Droids deemed it a better decision to have Hex sleep in the infirmary.
"You can't be serious, it's just a broken leg." He complained. Lexi smiled deviously, knowing it would be just Jeffrey and Jessy in their tent.

 

 

...

 

 

The next morning, Trel set off with her squad, in their charcoal grey, digital camouflage gear.
"They only have around 35 minutes to sneak in and open the gates before the camo suits run out of juice" Jeffrey said grimly.
"It's time to create a diversion. You stay safe, I don't want to lose the finest soldiers in GAR."
Lexi ignored the warning. They were on crunch time, they had to be ready at the gate when Trel opened it. She ordered her unit to push forward.
The battle had begun. Lexi charged forward, carried by the heat of battle, unaware that the droids pushed her unit back.

 

 

Too late, she realized the full extent of the droid's numbers.
Lexi was surrounded, dual DC-15s blasters in her hands.
"Stand Down, Jedi" a droid ordered
Jedi? She realized they've never seen a female clone before now. She could use this to her advantage.

 

 

She dropped her blasters.

 

 

"This is 1080, come in command, we have captured a Jedi."
She could hear droid voices saying "Is it a Jedi? It looks like a Jedi. It's wearing clone armor though. Well, clones aren't female, it must be a Jedi."
Grievous himself answers, and a large B2 holds Lexi's arms behind her back, and kicks her knees to the ground, forcing her to kneel, and removes her helmet
"Ah, very clever, Jedi scum, posing as a clone to fool our droids. Shame it didn't work." Grievous said in his raspy voice.
"Ah, you must be Grievous, the cyborg. Shame you lost your balls." Lexi mocked
This insult enraged Grievous, it wasn't like anything he'd heard from a captured Jedi before.
"Trade offs were made, yes.” he snarled. “But now I'm a force that even Jedi fear!"
"Oh, I bet. And tell me, which of us is losing their cool right now?" Lexi mused.
"She does have a point" a droid says. It's head is off in seconds.
"I bet you miss being able to reproduce, are you jealous?" She said. Immediately she realizing that she'd slipped up, for Jedi don't reproduce.
Ignoring the insult, Grievous asked, "Tell me, where is your light saber, Jedi?"
“Crap” Lexi thought
"I, erm, dropped it." She replied hastily.
She could hear an explosion coming from behind Grievous. Must be Trel's doing.
"This is no Jedi! Dispose of her!” Grievous order, muttering, “What a waste of time” as he turned away.
“Double Crap” she thought, sweat forming on her brow. The B-2 knocked her over, face down.
Lexi was spewing curses. She screwed up, big time. Now she was going to die a humiliating death to pay for it. A droid took aim at Lexi. Suddenly, it slipped, shooting the B2 that was holding lexi down, freeing her.
"Thanks" she muttered, relieved and shaken. She quickly got up, capitalizing on the surprise.
Droids fired everywhere, trying to shoot her in the chaos, hitting each other instead. Still, the numbers were overwhelming, and she couldn't count on a second fluke.
So she booked it, and ran harder than she ever had before, pushing her legs, body and mind to the absolute limit.

 

...

 

 

“They know" Lexi gasped, panting. Her face looked like a like had decided to dump itself on her, and she looked exhausted.
"Know what?" Jeffrey asked urgently.
"They didn't know I was a clone, thought I was a Jedi. They intended to capture me, keep me hostage or something like that, till Grievous stepped in, and I, uhh, slipped up." She replied sheepishly.
Seeing the confused expression Jeffrey had, she reiterated. "They know about 802" 

 

 

Shadow Gamer's Book

Nitro engines are shot!” Nyra shouted over the roar of the gun recoil and flames, looking towards Emerald to get a briefing on his situation.
“Shield generators are half broken and the room's on fire, I can't even get in there to fix it!” Emerald yelled back, wiping the sweat off his brow and turning towards Nova. “Nova, the nitro eng-”
“I don't care!” he shouted back. “Just tell me our situation already!” Nova was practically slapping the keyboard, trying to get the ship to go on autopilot or something useful so he could focus on more crucial things.
Like firing cannons.
“We can't use nitro and we can't turn on the shields.” Nyra shouted, a scowling forming on her face as she grew impatient.
“Nyra, I want those nitro boosters on in five minutes. And Emerald-” He paused as gunfire rained down on the ship while Nyra dashed to the Nitrogen Engine room. “Man those damned guns! Leave the shield be!” he screamed as he turned back to his keyboard.
He made a mental note to improve the cannon's AI after this. If they ever got out of this. Suddenly, a light flashed on adjacent monitor's LED screen.
“WE HAVE A BREACH! SECTOR 10, FOOD STORAGE!” Nova screeched at the top of his lungs. Nrya burst out of the engine room and dashed to suit rack, and somehow managed to slip one on in under a minute. She knew stale food meant death. After turning on her suit's air tank and the room's airlock, she slammed a button, opening a shuttle door to outer space. As she “leaped” unto the outside of the craft and into outer space, she started climbing towards sector 10's roof, she caught a glimpse of their attackers. Four ships, three with Mark3 thrusters, and one in front of the formation with Mark4 thrusters. The rest of the ships carried Plasma guns, and the front ship a Plasma cannon. They each had hulls made of some asteroid metal fused with titanium. She froze at the final detail. Nova hadn’t told her this.
All the ships were coated red.
All bared the signs of the empire.

Nyra recoiled as a ball of plasma hit one of the ships in the formation, blowing off one of it's wings. It didn't really matter though, since there was no wind, gravity, or many of a planet's physics in space. Remembering her purpose for being there, Nyra quickly set back into motion, climbing towards the breach and the holes surrounding it that one of the empire ships made. She climbed faster when a plasma bullet whizzed past her and landed into the ship, making a small hole. When she arrived there, she took a small plate of metal and put it over the hole, making sure there were no areas she didn't cover. She then took a device composed of a can and a panel attached to the front, pressed a button on the can and pushed the panel against the metal plate. The plate slowly started dissolving into a liquid, and once she was sure the plate had fused with the ship, she pressed a button on the device and removed the device from the now fused plate. She grimaced as another bullet nested itself into the hull of the ship beside her. Crawling back into the suit rack room, she pushed a button and the shuttle door closed, re-enabling artificial gravity and turning the air systems on in the room. She thudded to the floor, but quickly got up and took off her suit, opening the door to the rest of the ship and walking out when she put it back on the rack. Nova immediately starting sent a barrage of questions her way. “Is the breach fixed? Who is firing at us? Bounty Hunters? Pirates? Bounty hunters shouldn't be after us, unless-”
“Shut up already!” Nyra yelled “The damned breached is fixed, and none of those things are hunting us down!”
“Then what?” Nova shot back.
Nyra took a deep breath before she replied. “The empire.”
Nova's face paled.
“The empire?”

[Jack.EXE]

to start us off, I'll go ahead and tell you about the characters I already have.

 

B-32-192 "Jeffrey" (Commander)

B-33-192 "Jessy" (Major)

B-16-066 "Hex" (Major)

B-48-144 "Lexi" (Captain)

B-64-088 "Bin" (Lieutenant)

B-64-089 "Bash" (Sargent)

 

 

Jeffrey

The commander of the legion, stressed with leading and feels like his troops are judging him for his decisions, thankful for Jessy and Hex, who help keep the rowdy 802 in line.

 

Jessy

Jeffrey's right hand Ma--- Woman? Yes, the 802 is the experimental testing grounds, which includes possible gene donors. She is headstrong, and never afraid to question anything.

 

Hex

Coming from the number assigned to his batch, Hex, refers to hexadecimal. Gruff with a short temper, you dont want to upset this man, though this makes him effective at keeping troops in line.

 

Lexi

Coming from another batch of female clones. She's very light hearted & perky, never afraid to abuse her "feminine charm" or crack a joke.

 

Bin & Bash

the names are a reference to linux, simple as that. following Lexi, they have taken in her traits as well, effectively becoming the "Fred & George" of 802

[Valkyrie Dare]

Sounds interesting, I'll add stuff if I come up with any ideas.

[Jack.EXE]

well, it appears this forum appreciates women's butts more than Star Wars...

[Jack.EXE]

Here's a pic of jessy I came up with earlier, I'm not super good at drawing, but at least this gives you a good idea of what the characters look like.

 

[gastew15]

well, it appears this forum appreciates women's butts more than Star Wars...

Let's be honest though, butts are pretty nice... This seems like a really cool idea though, I mean I have a terrible imagination and can't really help with the story, but it still sound really awesome never the less. Good luck on trying to revive it!

[Jack.EXE]

Let's be honest though, butts are pretty nice... This seems like a really cool idea though, I mean I have a terrible imagination and can't really help with the story, but it still sound really awesome never the less. Good luck on trying to revive it!

 

lol, right.

 

anyway, I'm currently trying to figure out a good way to show off the markings without having to turn that [Possible NSFW warning] into [NSFW Warning]

 

markings being:

 

'802' tattoo on left breast, about 4' above nipple

serial number on right shoulder, on the back, above the shoulder blade (B-XX-XXX)

Scars (Hex has quite a few)

[gastew15]

lol, right.

 

anyway, I'm currently trying to figure out a good way to show off the markings without having to turn that [Possible NSFW warning] into [NSFW Warning]

 

markings being:

 

'802' tattoo on left breast, about 4' above nipple

serial number on right shoulder, on the back, above the shoulder blade (B-XX-XXX)

Scars (Hex has quite a few)

You might be able to use a modified version of the #3 pose here or something and have her partially clothed with armor on the side or something. (You could do this for the male troopers too, just not that pose obviously ..)

 

 

Oh yea, I also drew up a base run of the mill clone trooper to possibly draw something with. (I'll probably just make it look standard, and then work on possibly an actual character without a helmet on. *I might actually work on making the colors or something slightly different to fit a character and then pair it the the other picture I'll draw.) *Note: I'm by no means a very good artist though.

 

[Jack.EXE]

 

this is actually extremely helpful, I've been looking for something like this for a long time!

[Jack.EXE]

 

Here's lexi, minus top...

 

I think it gives a good representation of the location of tattoos (serial number, legion number)

[Mentalguy]

Major "Clutch"- One of the best tacticians in all the clone units. whenever the job seems impossible, even for clone standards, he is the go to man.

Corporal "Twitch"- After an accident while in training, he developed a twitch that came and went. While his condition has been healed, the name stuck.

Sergeant-"Emma" "Bonfire"- Bonfire is not her call-sign, but due to her specialty with flamethrowers, those she is closest to call her that.

 

 

go ahead and give them numeric designations.

 

 

edit- one more

 

Pvt "Skyballs" Due to an error in the cloning process giving him limited use of his legs, he was sent to the unit's intelligence section. He can normally be found giving squads up to date weather patterns and enemy troop movement using thermal recon satellites.

[Jack.EXE]

Major "Clutch"- One of the best tacticians in all the clone units. whenever the job seems impossible, even for clone standards, he is the go to man.

Corporal "Twitch"- After an accident while in training, he developed a twitch that came and went. While his condition has been healed, the name stuck.

Sergeant-"Emma" "Bonfire"- Bonfire is not her call-sign, but due to her specialty with flamethrowers, those she is closest to call her that.

 

 

go ahead and give them numeric designations.

 

 

edit- one more

 

Pvt "Skyballs" Due to an error in the cloning process giving him limited use of his legs, he was sent to the unit's intelligence section. He can normally be found giving squads up to date weather patterns and enemy troop movement using thermal recon satellites.

 

do you wish to dictate the appearance of said clones? if not I can shovel them in with existing appearances.

[Mentalguy]

do you wish to dictate the appearance of said clones? if not I can shovel them in with existing appearances.

You can do that, Im not good with appearances.

 

Though, skyballs wouldnt have combat gear and bonfire would have added fire-proof plates to hers.

[Valkyrie Dare]

Claiming batches 42 and 72.

[Jack.EXE]

You can do that, Im not good with appearances.

 

Though, skyballs wouldnt have combat gear and bonfire would have added fire-proof plates to hers.

 

B-32-084

B-01-111

B-72-069

B-43-099

 

Claiming batches 42 and 72.

acknowledged, I'm starting a list of claims by username and batches

[UselessBread]

I hope there will be someone who wants them dead and says "slash bin, slash bash"

[Jack.EXE]

I hope there will be someone who wants them dead and says "slash bin, slash bash"

there has to be.

[Jack.EXE]

 

Alright, those are the 3 I have so far, still need hex, bin & bash.

 

unfortunately, I'm going on vacation for a week, so I wont be very active on this thread or the forum, but I will continue working on the story as me & @Valkyrie Dare come up with it

[Jack.EXE]

Alright, so I get the odd feeling like I'm limiting the creative process by not just going ahead and putting [56K warning] [NSFW Warning] in the title, and letting you guys go ham with your 4k drawings with no limits on content, so I'm just going to say this:

 

These are allowed, but there is a method of conduct:

 

put any 4k images, or images with nudity in a spoiler, and include a preview image (no larger than 480p) above the spoiler, if the image is NSFW, sensor it for the preview.

Simple? Ok, good.

 

in the meantime, I'm going to try to create some scenery.

[Jack.EXE]

Chapter 1

 

A long, drawn out "good morning" wakes Jeffrey, only to find Jessy, his second in command, sitting on his waist.

"Aren't you excited? Today's the 802's first mission! Time to prove ourselves!" She says.

"More like terrified. Sure, we've posted high marks in training, but that's training. The clones that came back from Geonosis, it was a living hell." Jeffrey replies

Hex, overhearing the conversation, Grumbles

"Terrified or not, you've got a job to do, just like us."

"You guys filmin' a pornography over there or something? I want in!" Lexi, the bunk's flirt, yells sarcastically.

Jeffrey & Jessy suddenly realise their positioning, and they get up.

 

A few minutes pass, and bin, the lieutenant under Lexi, walks in with a bundle of rations.

"You missed breakfast, you're lucky I've got such a kind heart as to bring some of whatever this stuff is back" He says.

"Thank you, but where's bash? Aren't you together wherever you go?" Lexi replies

"The idiot got his foot stuck in the trash, after I dared him to kick it, well, more like ordered. Some chap from the 501st is helping him" Bin Joked.

At that moment, Bash stumbled in, steaming. "Ha Ha, very funny. Now, any idea where we are going?"

Jessy responded "Intel picked up a distress call on a distant planet, Hoth, it appears to be called."

"That's uncharted territory, or so we thought, We're going in blind either way." Jeffrey added.

"Great, how many are they sending?" Lexi asked

"Unfortunately, We dont have the same option that our brothers had on geonosis, the legion is getting split up over the whole system, us six are searching a 100 kilometer squared area towards the south of the planet." Jeffrey said.

"Anyway, relax, prepare, shower, whatever you do to get ready, just be in the hangar in 5 hours." He added.

[Jack.EXE]

Nothing ever goes right the first time.
The ship lurched as it approached it's target, causing Jessy to slip, knock over Jeffrey, and fall out along with him, hitting the ground quite hard.
The ship carried on for another 20 Kilometers before finally crashing to a stop, sending Hex flying as well.

 

Lexi, Bin and Bash get out of the crashed ship, and attempt to contact the others, but no reply from Hex, and Jeffrey's reply is cutt off from a sudden, powerful storm.

 

Jeffrey tried to re-establish contact, to no avail.
"This is B-32-192 and B-33-192, our ship has crashed, and we have been separated from the group. Come in, anyone? Our armour is   compromised, we're going to freeze!" Jeffrey called out
  "Lexi, Hex, Bin, Bash, come in? Jessy's with me. Anyone?"
"Looks like we're on our own,  we better find shelter. Jessy commented
Their armour was shot, they were uninjured thankfully, the armour took the blow of landing.

 

 

They trudged on, with no idea what direction they were heading, all they cared was to get out of the cold.

 

 

Soon Jeffrey fell over, and began to dig.
"The snow here's deep enough to dig a small cave, get the wind off our backs" Jeffrey said, And She joined him.
Soon they were under the snow, with just enough room to sit up, barely.

 

 

 

Still cold, jeffrey began looking through what was left of his pack, a single ration brick.
"We're doomed, nothing for heat here. lost the sleeping pack in the crash." He complained
Their training was useless here, it was time for a crazy idea, just something that might work.
Jessy's gears began to turn, and she had just that, a crazy idea. she took off the top half of her undersuit, to which jeffrey asked
"What the hell are you doing? that wont-- oh"
She slipped the undersuit on over jeffrey's, and slipped in his with him.
"Always said these things could stretch to fit a whole bed, see? make-shift sleeping bag" she said
She wrapped her arms around him, and he did the same, huddling like penguins (going to replace penguins with some star wars equivalent)
hours passed, even days, the time in that cave felt timeless to them, and just as they blacked out, the cave collapsed.

 

 

 

Hex, landed quite hard, he was sure he broke his leg. He didn't care, however, he had to find the others.

 

 

 

Lexi, bin, and bash looked over the ship after contact was lost
"Unflyable, it wont even start" Bash said.
"Well duh, did you see what hit the ship?" Lexi asked
"It wasn't a missile, and definitely not droids" bin said, as he found what had pierced the hull of the gunship
  "It's quite a large rock, we're definitely not alone out here."
"I'm going to look for the others, stay here and keep your beacons live" Lexi said, as she walked off in Hex's direction

 

 

A few hours later, she found him, beaten, bruised, and limping, with possibly even more scars than before.
"What have you gotten into?" Lexi aksed.
"There's beasts here, they are incredibly strong, I swear I saw one pick up a boulder like nothing." Hex replied
"there's one in the ship, those beasts must have knocked us down." She commented
  "Come on, we gotta go find our favourite couple."
"They're not a couple, you and I both know that." He replied
"You know what I saw, they even shower together, I've got it on camera!" Lexi argued
"You forget, she was clothed, and he was covered in sludge, YOU pushed him in it in the first place" Hex exlaimed.
"Fine, one day though, they'll be togeth--" She said as she slipped

Lexi's foot fell a bit deeper than she thought it would, and Hex scanned the area
"Two life forms, though faint." He said.
"Beasts?" She asked.
"No, below you." He replied.

 

 

They began to dig, and uncovered their commanding officers, practically cuddling
"See? I told you they're a couple, skin on skin and everything" Lexi exclaimed.
"Clever girl, she used their tops as a make-shift sleeping bag, probably saved their lives." Hex Commented, ignoring Lexi
"Oh dear, they're freezing though, we gotta get them back, don't separate them, you got a bag?" Lexi asked.

 

Hex looked through his pack, a body-bag.
"They're not dead, but this should work the same." he said, as he slipped the bag over them, and picked it up." He said

 

 

 

Jeffrey and Jessy woke up at the same time, to bin and bash staring at them, and Lexi started probing them with questions of the sexual nature, claiming she caught them sleeping together.
"Will you cut it out? what help does this have?" Jessy snapped.
"Fine" Lexi sighed, and she sat down.

 

 

 

A few more hours passed, not much was said.
Finally, the rescue ship arrived.

[Shadow Gamer]

I'll help with editing, if you like. I've wrote a few short stories of my own and I'm better at modifying work than creating it. 

[Jack.EXE]

I'll help with editing, if you like. I've wrote a few short stories of my own and I'm better at modifying work than creating it. 

 

Awesome, never good with formatting, Then again, it doesn't help that the forum deletes my formatting whenever I paste something