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first digital painting critiques?

Elite14

so this is my first painting I have ever done so go easy on me :P

I couldn't get the ground to look quite right but other than that I'm quite happen with that. what do you think?

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the sky looks nice, the trees and the ground could be improved, the clouds look like clouds yet the texture just feels off

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First off, you've done a 10x better job then I've done, If I was to nit pick I would say that a faded sky would look better with more normal looking clouds 

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I actually dig the sky.  Got that surreal look going on with the clouds.

 

The ground and trees could use improvement though.  Maybe try to give those the same surreal look like the sky.

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