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First I noticed some issues myself

 

In the begining i was tripping over my words

 

my audio went in and out 

 

But please give me again some contructive critisism

 

btw dont see this as advertising I dont care if u like sub ect just want ur ideas on it

 

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I didn't have a problem with the audio and your voice is nice and clear. What are your using to record your voice?

 

If you want some criticism, try working on sounding more natural. My best gues is that you wrote a script, and you are reading off the script. Also try to control your breathing, having those deep breaths in a video can be very distracting

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no audio problems, BUT STOP SAYING NICE!!, xD

 

also the beginning 'slideshow' is nice but try it with more pictures

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I liked it, but it sounded scripted, but keep up the good work!

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how old are you you sound like a girl :P 

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An advise I got from playing lots of plays [like theatre] speak in a slightly deeper voice than usual. Makes it sound better overall, you won't lose breath [and I'd really appreciate it] ;P

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The sound is fine here.

 

 

Don't be rude...

fine fine fine it sounds fine 

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I like it, a few comments: Maybe blend in some pictures/alternative angles? It would keep the video more interesting while listening to you, kind of like a b-roll. Right now your commentary keeps me interested but the video doesn't. i think that the reviews over at the Tek Syndicate are really good at that.

 

I also agree with what's been said about sounding more natural and controlling your breath and pace a bit more, so it doesn't feel as rushed.

 

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how old are you you sound like a girl :P

Considering your name is 'LegoPC' you have no room to talk.

 

Your voice is fine man :)

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Considering your name is 'LegoPC' you have no room to talk.

 

Your voice is fine man :)

why dont you join me on teamspeak and then we will see 

If you tell a big enough lie and tell it frequently enough it will be believed.

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why dont you join me on teamspeak and then we will see 

I don't care if you have a deep voice, I am saying if your name is 'LegoPC' you have no room to be insulting other people, especially if you're just doing it be to a dick.

Remember you sounded like a girl before. 

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 I am saying if your name is 'LegoPC' you have no room to be insulting other people

why.

If you tell a big enough lie and tell it frequently enough it will be believed.

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legos are assosiated with children

NO legos are MANLY :D

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