How is my intro?

[BlueBeachMonsta]

I would like to share my tech knowledge & entertain people on my new channel (no adverts channel not up yet), but how is my intro?

[WinNut]

Pretty good, however I would be more interested if the intro was more tech-oriented, maybe a PS4 blowing up? 

[xrex64]

The audio should fade out instead of abruptly ending. 

[Geekazoid]

The audio should fade out instead of abruptly ending.

Agreed sir!

[BlueBeachMonsta]

The audio should fade out instead of abruptly ending. 

It does in Vegas but when I rendered it must have gone wrong, thanks for letting me know though

[BlueBeachMonsta]

Pretty good, however I would be more interested if the intro was more tech-oriented, maybe a PS4 blowing up? 

Yes, but a PC :3

[simtransporter]

Hmm, ok.... so there's a field full of flowers and a massive explosion that appears to have no source, and it also doesn't seem to burn anything. I can't see how this is in any way related to tech, but I guess people will think it's cool because of explosions. idk

[Kyuubixchidori]

It does in Vegas but when I rendered it must have gone wrong, thanks for letting me know though

sounds like it does fade, its just such a short fade

[WinNut]

Yes, but a PC :3

I say a PS4 catching fire and a PC falling down and landing in it's place after the fire is extingushed.

 

because PCMasterRace

[TheWall]

Sorry but it's horrible, an intro should be clean and simple, not have explosions.

[BlueBeachMonsta]

I say a PS4 catching fire and a PC falling down and landing in it's place after the fire is extingushed.

 

because PCMasterRace

Sorry my brain decided not to function so yes, I can confirm that I will replace it for a console, most likely the PS4

[BlueBeachMonsta]

Sorry but it's horrible, an intro should be clean and simple, not have explosions.

Thanks for the feedback, it's like marmite I suppose, I'd want to keep this until my channel got bigger/neater, atm it's gunna be kinda ghetto so y'know.

[WinNut]

Thanks for the feedback, it's like marmite I suppose, I'd want to keep this until my channel got bigger/neater, atm it's gunna be kinda ghetto so y'know.

PM me a link when you create the channel, I'll give you the benefit of a sub.

[VegetarianBoy]

3/10 - I didn't like it :c

[BlueBeachMonsta]

PM me a link when you create the channel, I'll give you the benefit of a sub.

I certainly will

Do you have a channel I could check out?

[BlueBeachMonsta]

3/10 - I didn't like it :c

Bit harsh I think but I'm making the flowers a PS4 which might help just a teeny bit maybe?

[VegetarianBoy]

Bit harsh I think but I'm making the flowers a PS4 which might help just a teeny bit maybe?

Nah, it should be as simple and short as possible. Adding more stuff won't help.

[BlueBeachMonsta]

PM me a link when you create the channel, I'll give you the benefit of a sub.

[BlueBeachMonsta]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgu0RP9AWEc&feature=youtu.be

(Will tweak)

[SkinnyAnimus]

Looks really good but it should have more to do with tech than that.

[TheGavino]

(Will tweak)

I would center the ps4 in the middle and try to hide the ps4 logo if you can manage that. 

[flibberdipper]

Make a PC fall on a PS4, creating an explosion. That would be great.

[JFreeman]

You could add a picture of Obama sliding in from the side after it blows up. He could be clutching the Xbox one. 

 

Edit: or the steam logo.  :lol:

[XTankSlayerX]

Errr... Not a fan of that kind of stuff. using images that are from google searches...