802 Redux [16+] [56K Warning]

[Jack.EXE]

Jeffrey woke up to Jessie sitting on his waist, her long black hair neatly brushed, and minty eyes staring at him, She had been waiting for him a while.

“You’re finally up, first mission today!” she said, sitting up. She was tall at 1.77 meters, her neat hair fell around her medium breasts. She slid off, and reached a hand out to Jeffrey go pull him up, who accepted the gesture.

 

 

A set of fingers rapped upon the wall next to them.

 

 

“Sorry to interrupt your moment,” said another female, whom the two turned to view. Katt, a red head with a tendency to flirt, jumped up on the bed as well. She could easily be described as sexy, with all the classic traits. Her red hair was pulled back into a ponytail, but a good few of her bangs stay free, She carries herself chest first, full of confidence, with a bust to match. Like Jessie, she was tall, though not as tall as Jessie herself, at 1.72 meters.

 

 

“So, When are we going on this mission?” Katt asked.

“Today, at about 0800, so I’d suggest loading up,” Jessie replied

Jeffrey got up and slid off the bunk, followed by the two girls. He was also tall, at 1.77, same as Jessie, much to Katt’s teasing. and the trio walked to their locker room. The barracks weren't designed for multi gender occupants, so many facilities never regarded such. They were bunk-mates, and shared 3 adjacent lockers.

“You’d think after what, 10 years of nudity in here I’d be comfortable? But I still have to cover my eyes when you change,” Jeffrey mentioned.

“I’d just consider it noble of you to respect our privacy,” Jessie said, pulling off her night robes and slipping into an undersuit.

“You can look now,” she added

Jeffrey changed as well, and Katt covered her eyes, screaming “The horror!” sarcastically.

“Shut up.” Jeffrey and Jessie said simultaneously.

They put on the special, black striped, phrik alloy armour, plastoid simply wouldn’t cut it for clones as valuable as the 802. Even the female armour had allowances for their chest.

 

~~~~

 

Hex was leaning against the wall, cleaning his XM-101V, an experimental burstfire rifle, based on an advancement of the DC-15 sidearm’s recharging cell and an attempt at a long barrel in a short package, placing the cell behind the trigger. He never spoke much, unless there was something that needed to be said.

When Jeffrey, Jessie, and Katt walked in, he nodded to them, and announced,

“Trel’s waiting in the bridge.”

“Thank you, Hex,” Jeffrey noted.

“Katt, why don't you go round up the stealth ops? Trel will want to see them,” Jessy added.

Katt nodded and darted off, surprisingly fast.

 

 

Jeffrey and Jessie entered the elevator, They’d have at least a minute to the bridge.

Jessie, deciding to start a conversation, asked,

“Excited for the mission?”

“Of course, not every day the 802 gets chosen,” He replied.

“We’ve never been chosen, today’s the first,” She teased.

 

 

The doors opened, and they stepped out onto the bridge. Clones were running all over in order to prepare for launch. Trel stood amidst all of this, her robes no different than the rest of the padawans, though she was almost of age, at 17. Unlike Jessie and Jeffrey, she wasn't super tall, at only 1.62 meters. She did however carry herself with pride, and had a great air of command around her. Her eyes were as brown as her shoulder length hair, which in turn matched her robes. At her hip was a lightsaber, which, when activated, had a golden blade, a symbol of a Sentinel, increasingly rare these days.

 

 

“Glad you could join us,” she said, noting their arrival.

“I’m Commander XTM-32-192, or Jeffrey. Whichever you see fit” Jeffrey chuckled

“And this is?” Trel asked

“Major XTF-33-192” Jessie said, taking off her helmet. “but I like to go by Jessie.”

“Jeffrey & Jessie” Trel said to herself, memorizing “alright. I heard this is your first mission?”

“Yes mam, I suppose you’d like to inspect the stealth ops yourself?” Jeffrey asked.

“I would very much like that.” Trel commented “Lead on, commander”

 

 

Jeffrey almost forgot, he’s a commander, equal in rank to the padawan. He fired up his comlink, and Katt appeared on the screen.

 

“Katt, you got Sigma rounded up?” he asked.

“Yeah, The jedi-,” Katt started.

“The jedi has a name,” Trel mentioned, “Trel.”

“Trel then, is sure to love them.” Katt finished.

 

 

On the way, they passed Hex, who nodded to them, and followed them three paces behind.

Hex was a brute of a clone designated XTM-16-066. He was officially a major, but his lack of talking cost him quite a few arguments with the other two majors, notably Jessie. Still, his powerful body more than makes up for this. He’s 1.74 Meters tall, with a lean, musclebound body, even his pectorals could be comparable to Trel’s own bust. He puts this body to good use, though, and can take more damage than most clones will dish out in a lifetime.

 

 

The group entered a locker room with twelve females sorting gear for the coming mission. Their attire resembled that of fatigues, with a white, low cut tank top, and black cargo pants. They snapped to attention when Katt gave the command.

 

 

“Hand picked by me out of Batch 72, all XTF class,” Katt said

“XTF?” Trel asked, hearing the term once before.

“eXperimental Trooper Female, 802 is the testing grounds for weapons, armour, and even genes,” Katt explained. “In short, we get all the goodies, including the goodies,” she said, gesturing her torso, drawing a short burst of laughter from Sigma.

 

“And XTM would be male, correct?” Trel asked, just to be sure.

“Bingo,” Jeffrey answered.

 

“Do you all have names?” Trel asked.

The girls nodded yes, and Katt gave out the nicknames.

“XTF-72-101 Nat, XTF-72-088 Kristy, XTF-72-048 Sam, XTF-72-072 Dubs” She began, mouth drying from all the numbers.

“Speed, Jackie, Meadow, Risky, Cassie, Emma, Drew, and finally Alice,” She finished.

 

 

Trel looked them all up and down, noting their physical features, as well as their personality shown through stance. She’s good at this kind of thing. They were the same height as Trel, 1.62 Meters, but while She was lean and musclebound, the 12 had curvier figures, with more powerful legs, and a thicker torso, with a fuller chest. They all shared long cut, blonde hair, with icy blue eyes, and a caring oval face. They were definitely built for stealth, she thought.

 

 

“Check your gear, we’re landing in an hour” Trel said.

“Fifteen minutes until gunship launch, all landing personnel to the hangar,” the woman on the intercom announced, but Jeffrey and the others were already loaded up by this time.

 

 

Landing went uneventfully, with hardly a problem.

“I dont like it, aren't they supposed to be shooting at us?” Hex grumbled.

“Be thankful they aren't,” Jessie retorted

“They can't see us yet, we’re landing outside their radar,” the pilot explained.

“Landing in 2 minutes,” He added.

 

 

As soon as they landed, Jeffrey gave the order to pitch the tents and set up camp. Quickly, numerous 12 man tents went up, along with long medical shelters and a mess hall.

Jeffrey Jessie, Hex, and Trell had a tent to themselves, and they set up what belongings they had in it.

 

 

Hours passed with the troops preparing for the combat they were sure to face the next day, and it quickly became night. The members of the officer’s tent were wearing their night robes, discussing tomorrow’s plan when Katt walked in.

“Hope I'm not intruding on anything,” She said.

“It’s fine,” Trel replied, “We were just discussing tomorrow’s plan.”

“We’re going to take the planet back, and restore a much needed crystal supply to the Jedi,” Jeffrey filled her in.

“Bin ‘n’ Bash brought some coffee, if you’re interested,” Katt offered.

Bash, along with Bin, his closest numerical brother, were Katt’s closest lieutenants

“Why not?” Jeffrey laughed, “I could use a cup.”

The two stumbled in, with at least 4 pots each.

Bash, like his brother, was a medium sized clone, 1.68 meters tall, with blue eyes, brown hair in a surfer dude cut, and mild muscles.

The group talked for hours before finally Katt, Bin and bash left, and the group settled in for bed.

 

~~~~

 

The next morning Jeffrey and Trel stood up and addressed the legion, and gave everyone the run-down.

“Trel will be sneaking in with Sigma, and they’ll open the gates for us, we’ll then storm the fort,” Jeffrey cheerfully said. “Simple enough?”

“Just remember, stay safe. We’re the best the GAR has to offer, and I’d hate to lose any of you,” He continued.

 

 

Trel and the girls from Sigma donned their charcoal grey, digital camo stealth gear, and activated their cloaking fields. The group moved off, shifting through the tall, dry grass.

“They only have 28 minutes to complete their part and get out, prepare the troops for battle,” Jeffrey said to Hex & Jessie, who both replied with a nod, followed by jogging off to the armoury.

 

~~~~

 

 

Katt was ecstatic, the 802’s first mission, her first mission. She had been waiting for 10 years for this day. She practically flew to her tent, and donned her set of armour. Trained as a tech specialist, she could operate any radio, hack any computer, or even re-program droids, or at least she liked to think, she hadn't ever really tried it yet. Nonetheless, her skills were admirable, and she wore the tech gear to prove it, with a long range antenna on her right shoulder, and an HKR touch computer on her left wrist, affectionately called the Hacker’s toolkit.

 

She patted the 802 painted on the left breastplate for good luck, grabbed her XM-101V, and set off for the front lines.

“Glad you could join us, captain,” Bash said.

“Thanks, has Jeffrey given the order to move out yet?” Kat asked.

“Obviously not,” Bin answered.

 

~~~~

 

Jeffrey was getting antsy, Trel hadn't called back with any news of success yet, he looked at the time, it had been 44 minutes since Trel had left.

“Alright, we’re moving out, time to get to the front lines” Jeffrey said to Jessie.

“On it,” She replied.

She hopped off of the lookout tower, landing with such finesse Jeffrey couldn't help but stare. Jeffrey pulled up his comlink and called the captains.

“Get the troops on the move,” Jeffrey ordered.

“Yessir,” the group replied.

 

He took a deep breath in, and tried to relax for the battle to come.

He walked down the stairs, last thing he needs to do right now is to try to one up Jessie and break something.

 

~~~~

 

Katt gave the order to move out, and they began their march towards the CIS garrison.

“How boring,” She thought. She decided to strike up a conversation with a girl beside her.

“Any guesses on what’s going on with the enemy right now?” She asked.

“Cant be good, Commander said they only had 28 minutes to complete the mission before the stealth fields run out,” The clone said grimly “It’s been 48.”

“I sure hope they’re alright, I hand picked them, you know, Sigma,” Katt added.

“We can only hope, 72’s a good lookin’ batch, ya know?” The girl said.

“And which batch are you?” Katt asked, “And I’m Katt, by the way, a 48.”

“I’m from 63. You know, pale, brown hair, grey eyes,” She said. “The name’s Abby.”

“Right, gotcha. I’m so nervous right now, with the first mission and all,” Katt confessed.

“We all are, every one of us,” Abby reassured her, “You just gotta keep that feeling down though, and focus on the fight ahead.”

 

Just as she said this, they came over the hill and saw the CIS base, a low structure with thick walls and swarming with droids. Katt’s comlink sprang to life, and a clear picture of Jeffrey came into view.

“Hold off for a minute, stay low, and don't get spotted,” He told the captains, “Katt, what do you see?”

She peered off into the camp, but to no luck, the walls were tall enough to block the view.

“Nothing, the same as you,” She replied.

These call outs went on with the captains, until all 16 had given their views.

“Great, we’re going in blind then, be on your guard, there can be anything in there. Stay safe,” He finished.

 

The line surged forward, clones poured into the swarm of droids, and initially began to overwhelm them.

 

 

“Don't gotta worry ‘bout running out, just keep from overheating the cell,” Katt thought to herself, “Line up the shot, fire, move on.”

This pattern continued for what felt like hours, until Katt realized she was alone and surrounded.

Her allies had been pushed back.

 

“Stand down, Jedi,” A droid said.

Jedi? She was no jedi, she was a clone. They obviously hadn't seen a female clone before.

She could use this to her advantage.

She dropped her blaster.

This is nowhere near done, and we do intend to publish it as a book once we finish it.

There is more to come, an epic arc is planned.

[SAV1OUR]

uuuuu what i don't think we have a subsection for erotic fan fictions  

[Jack.EXE]

If you dont know, me and @Valkyrie Dare are currently re-writing 802, and the full, uncut version will be posted above.

[DoubleY]

So... Off topic is now writing class?

[Jack.EXE]

uuuuu what i don't think we have a subsection for erotic fan fictions  

How is this erotic?

So... Off topic is now writing class?

I'm posting a new thread for an uncut version of what we write, so we have a complete story seperate from the development thread.

[CowsGoRoar]

You can post it on reddit.

[Enderman]

So... Off topic is now writing class?

I wouldn't consider this 'writing'...

[Jack.EXE]

I wouldn't consider this 'writing'...

We only started re-writing the story about an hour ago, we already have the whole arc planned out, just releasing the first 3rd of the first chapter since we got that done.

 

It goes into more detail than the original story we started to write, hence two threads.

[Jack.EXE]

You can post it on reddit.

this started as an LTT project, it will end as one.

[CowsGoRoar]

this started as an LTT project, it will end as one.

So you don't mind if I uhh... borrow that project into reddit for a while?

[Jack.EXE]

So you don't mind if I uhh... borrow that project into reddit for a while?

Go for it! Just credit us. (Me, & Valkyrie Dare)

 

just understand, that we're still writing it, there's a much larger arc to this.

[Jack.EXE]

I've gotta go to bed, but I'll continue work on this tomorrow night.

[Jack.EXE]

due to the nature of this post, I will have to bump it every time I add to the OP