Can someone help me write a YouTube script

[Windows9]

I have done it, just need some better phrases in it. Can someone also suggest me a catchy title.

This is the product : 

And this is my version of the script

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This may not look like a conventional tape measure, but this is creativity put to use.  This tiny device can measure in metric and imperial units, as well as curved objects.

Place the device in the desired area and simply move it. To erase it, simply press the button in the middle.

The build quality is nothing short of remarkable, and is extremely robust, featuring aluminium sides and a glass back. That’s right, not acrylic glass. The two rubber seals give the makes the metal feel almost soft, and provides extra grip when moving it. It has a USB-C connector for recharging – even tech companies haven’t adopted this feature yet, and here we are with a USB-C device, for only $15.

For the accuracy test we placed it against a ruler, and it has millimetre precision.

You may be wondering, when will I ever need a digital tape measure, but believe me, there are instances when it becomes useful.

Ever wanted to wall mount a device only that it is inconvenient having to find a tape measure. Keep this little device handy, and measure away.

It is also useful if you wanted to measure a curved object. Simply enter the radius mode and use the device like normal.

 

[Haro]

2 hours ago, Windows9 said:

. To erase it,

I would say this is a little bit confusing ( at least it was for me ) maybe say something like to erase the previous measures or something along the lines 

 

2 hours ago, Windows9 said:

, featuring aluminium sides and a glass back. That’s right, not acrylic glass.

I would say maybe just say tempered glass straight ahead gives it more of a professional feel to it

 

[TempestCatto]

I'm too hungry to try and think this one over, but a suggestion: Try and make your scripts more natural. So instead of just being a wall of text you reread, make seem as though you're in a conversation with someone about it. Have a more natural speech pattern and try not to make it sound like you're reading something. Pastors and preachers in churches, synagogues, temples, etc usually do this. So it may be helpful to watch a sermon or message to see how they do it. Also just watching most LTT videos as well.

 

Good luck