Make This Sound Better

[abrila]

I've been working on the song for a while now and I would like to receive some feedback on it. This is far from finish but it's in the stage of development that it can go anywhere from here.

 

What do you like about it or dislike about it? What do you think should be added or subtracted away from the song?

 

Should I use .wav or some other format?

 

Download Link: MediaFire

 

Any feedback would do. Thank you.

[Guest GRRigger]

Is that trance? very bad TRTRTRTRTRTRTR interruptions. very vague and repetitive. 

[Bluethulhu]

The bass seems too present, but I don't know if this bothers anyone else.

[abrila]

Is it during the whole song or a certain portion?

[Bluethulhu]

Mostly the whole song, especially around 0:49.

[abrila]

What do u mean by trtrtrtr? And very vague?

[mr moose]

It gets a bit disjointed after 2:30 almost pear shaped. I'd stay away from syncopation in that style of music unless you can copy the format from a classical piece (which by the way is not the same as copywrite).

[t0wer]

Is that trance? very bad TRTRTRTRTRTRTR interruptions. very vague and repetitive. 

try downloading it.

I had the same weird sounds through the browser.