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Anyone want to tell me if there are any grammer/spelling mistakes? Thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l1Bop9IbhCJ1jKrEf24lgNyUPd9zXcKNIUAMJm9fPSQ/edit?usp=sharing

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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wut how can a blind person be an architect..

Don't speak german so can't help you :)

Then Dutch then?

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Grammatically it's not the best I've seen, but I didn't see any spelling mistakes.

I once had one of these, now I've got this.

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in the first part you say he was born in bla bla and then you say "er starb in" but personaly i would say "er is gestorben" 

edit: oh and you say "aber architecten ist" which would sort of translate to "but architect is" 

edit: edit: and you also say "Er begraben wurde unter Gremien und Rubel under er überlebte" which just doesnt make sense... 

edit: edit: edit" i would change "um alle kunste zuzammenbringen" to um alle kunste zuzammen zu bringen or something like that 

If you tell a big enough lie and tell it frequently enough it will be believed.

-Adolf Hitler 

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i made some suggestions in the doc under the name itmegaware

If you tell a big enough lie and tell it frequently enough it will be believed.

-Adolf Hitler 

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Walter Gropius war ein Deutscher Architekt. Er wurde am 18. Mai 1883 geboren und starb am 5. Juli 1969.   Er kann nicht ziehen(?), aber dennoch ist er Architekt.  Walter Gropius hat das Faguswerk gebaut.  Walter Gropius war ein Soldat in ersten Weltkrieg.  Er begraben wurde unter Gremien und Rubel under er überlebte(?).  Nach dem Krieg, baute Walter Gropius die Kunstschule Bauhaus, die gebaut wurde, um alle Formen der Kunst zusammenbringen.  Der Bauhaus-Stil wurde zu einem einflussreichen Baustil in der Architektur. Aus der Bauhaus-Zeit stammen unter anderem seine berühmten Türgriffe und Sessel. Als Hitler an die Macht kam, verließ Walter Gropius das Land und flüchtete 1934 nach Großbritannien. Im Jahr 1937 emigrierte er in die USA, dort lebte er in Lincoln, Massachusetts mit seine Familie.  Walter Gropius brachte die moderne Industrie in die Vereinigten Staaten.  Walter Gropius hat eine Moderne Industrie Hause(?).  Er war ein Ausschussmitglied am MIT und gründete die "The Young Architects Association", und "The Architects Collaborative". Er starb am 5. Juli 1969.

 

 

 

The parts I highlighted red are parts I am unable to understand, otherwise I corrected everything. The sentences are a little short and choppy, but it should be ok.

      

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Dat Linus ist Liebe. I'm dying! 

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Walter Gropius war ein Soldat im ersten Weltkrieg. Im Jahr 1937 emigrierte er in die USA, dort lebte er in Lincoln, Massachusetts mit seiner Familie.

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Walter Gropius war ein Soldat im ersten Weltkrieg. Im Jahr 1937 emigrierte er in die USA, dort lebte er in Lincoln, Massachusetts mit seiner Familie.

oh right, I missed those parts.

      

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Thanks everyone for your help! I'll edit it. I still have to have a whole other page tho, so I'll write that.

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Made my essay 2 pages, anyone want to check it out again?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l1Bop9IbhCJ1jKrEf24lgNyUPd9zXcKNIUAMJm9fPSQ/edit?usp=sharing

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Oh come on, literally 1 fucking thread above the fucking german talk thread.

I started this yesterday.

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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