Hold up a minute with this guys, I've made a bit of changes to the script to make it a bit more realistic. Most of it is too 'proper'. pilots tend to only talk like that when talking to tower.
(Skip everything before this, not needed)
J: Start engine 2, 2 clear
cp: engine 2 Starting. [Beat][Beat]
J: Start engine 3
cp, 3 clear, 3 starting. [Beat]
J: Start engine 1, 1 clear
CP : 1, uhh Starting. [Beat][Beat]
J: Start 4
CP: 4 clear.... and starting. [Beat][Beat}
Copilot: Copilot Ready.
Bombadier: Bombadier Ready.
Navigator: Nav Ready
Flight Engineer: Engineering is a Go.
Radio Operator: Radio's good.
(Missing Dorsal turret?)
Ball Turret Gunner: Ball Turret Ready.
Starboard Waist Gunner: Starboard Gunner Ready
Port Waist Gunner: Port Gunner Ready
Tail Gunner: Tail Gun Ready
J: Airfield Tower, this is Tango-Alpha One-Zero-Seven Requesting permission to taxi onto Runway Zero. Check Sortie Alpha Zero One Seven.
(edited too much radio trafic)
Tower: Tango-Alpha One-Zero-Seven, you are clear on Runway Zero
(Taxi's onto runway)
Tower: Tango-Alpha One-Zero-Seven,clear for takeoff, Fly safe.
J: Roger Tower, will do.
<Switch to meetup scene>
B-17 Pilot 2: B-17 callsign, soundoff.
J: I assume you are phoenix? We are the gladiators from the 97th. I see that you’re early.
B2: Affirmative, glad you can join us. We have 20 P-51’s from skyfox acting as bomber cover. They’re scouting ahead making sure we’re clear.
P-51 Pilot 1: Affirmative. Glad we could be of assistance. We’ll act as cover for as long as possible.
J: Thanks for the assistance, skyfox. Hopefully we won’t need it as this was a last minute plan and they haven’t completed the factory yet. We just need to set them back and hopefully they can’t complete it before this war is over.
B2: I can agree to that. Hold on, 1 o'clock high
<Cut to BF109, play recording from SWON>
P1: Looks like a bunch of BF109s. and I think some Stukas.
J: I was hoping we were going to get out of this easy
Tailgunner: Gotcha, hopefully they’re bad shots.
J: Doubt it, Just keep your cool
<Play out the scene>
(fighter polits wont be talking to bomber gunners
Random Pilot: on your 6!
Random bomber Pilot: I need fighter cover!
I’m going down!
Our Engine’s hit!
Where’s our cover!
We’re doing the best we can!
Moving to assist!
There’s a fire on your starboard wing!
P1: Looks like we won that one, who do we have left?
B2: I count 17 from gladiator and 8 from phoenix. some had to turn back though,They’re hit too bad. That leaves us with 17 bombers. should be enough to make the run.
P1: We are down to 31 aircraft intact enough to fight.
B2: We should be over target zone in an hour and a half, if we’re going to callin support, better do it now.
P2: This is the bulldogs. We’re here to cover the bombers and relieve any damaged fighters. Good luck on your way home.
P1: Thanks for the assistance. Any damaged fighters may turn back.
B2: We should be over the target in 72 minutes.
P1: Ready to provide cover.
B2: It’ll be night soon. Time for radio and light silence. They don’t have any radar nearby, so that should keep us clear.
B2: We’re over the target now, let 'em loose.
Different people: Bombs away
Lets head home fellas