Need Help on a furneral video

[thomas harding]

i had just had a very special mate past away last Saturday in Australia from riding a dirt bike and having a crash and i need to know how i can make my video better.the link down below is the video i have made but i dont like it and dont know what to do it to make it better 

here is the link 

 

[Nacho Marco Segui]

Sorry for your loss

[OddsCrazyStuff]

From a video standpoint so can the start be cleaned up. Its way to messy with all the short clips.

Select 1 or 2 news actors and stick to them.

[thomas harding]

Just now, OddsCrazyStuff said:

From a video standpoint so can the start be cleaned up. Its way to messy with all the short clips.

Select 1 or 2 news actors and stick to them.

is that just at the start

 

[Moonzy]

as long as the feelings are conveyed, it's good enough aint it?

 

I'm sorry for your loss, you have my condolence.

[duckwithanokhat]

I would change the text color, orange and yellow doesn't match with your mellow theme. Also try to keep the audio for each new station consistent, some are fine and some are blasting. Honestly the video is still pretty sweet as is . Try inserting transitions here and there between clips, too many sharp cuts.

 

Edit: Also the motorboat scene, don't loop that. You could just make it slowmo for the same duration.