chill track

[swtscp]

Hope you guys like it

https://soundcloud.com/swtscp/imperfection-1

[Guest]

its not chill and this is not facebook. and the logo is not chill and it looks like from horror movie. "sweet escape" lmao

my recommendation would be to take that middle part and work on it. and get a new logo FFS, here, this guy even makes FREE graphics http://linustechtips.com/main/topic/533886-free-graphics-for-all/page-4

 

it can be black and white, but it has to have clear picture. idk, like a seagull flying. not some horror-like monster skeleton face with 15 fingers or sumtin

[Nacho Marco Segui]

Where is the chill at?

[swtscp]

wait what? its not facebook?

i don't know to me it's a chill track... but fuck genre at this point you like or not

[Guest]

wait what? its not facebook?

i don't know to me it's a chill track... but fuck genre at this point you like or not

this is not facebook wall. even if you post in offtopic, that only means that you could not put it in other subforums. still tech forum.

 

pace of music has nothing to do with genre, even if genre is oriented towards happy/slow/quick/whatever

 

This is more "chill". Done in 2 minutes, searched for maybe 4. 

 

But definitly continue your creative passion, music is great. I love saggitarian. Will link some music i like if you want. 

 

About the "chill". I clicked on the link, expecting chill music. I got actually startled by this immidiate "electric piano" sound. The kick also doesnt help.

 

For me "chill" starts at 0:49. Maybe the main sound is just a tad too loud. But i like it! Would listen if you had longer.

 

If you need more criticism, send songs to me and i check.

[swtscp]

thank you, i understand what you meant now, to be honest i don't really know what genre it is also i just make whatever i feel like doing the name Imperfection come from the electric piano i recorded it while playing live so its not on time feel free to send me tracks that you like and thanks again for your feedback and your time i appreciate that

[Trik'Stari]

Seems fairly chill to me.

 

And for the quintillionth time, Off Topic is for "NON-TECH RELATED CONTENT ONLY". so stop spouting "this is a tech forum". No, this is the non-tech section of a tech related forum. Nothing wrong with him sharing his creation here.

 

@swtscp Nice track, keep up the good work.

[Volbet]

The middle part is pretty good. The beginning and end aren't really my cup of tea; I find them a bit too repetitive for my taste.

 

Don't let this discourage you, though.Too many cooks will spoil the broth, so you don't have to take what I say (or what anyone else says) into consideration. 

[Guest]

thank you, i understand what you meant now, to be honest i don't really know what genre it is also i just make whatever i feel like doing the name Imperfection come from the electric piano i recorded it while playing live so its not on time feel free to send me tracks that you like and thanks again for your feedback and your time i appreciate that

i dont browse much music theese day, so this might be a little outdated

this is not really chill, but same developer. i like to fly jets in games while listening to this

this also nice

as you can see, video helps to promote songs aswell.youtube is good platform if you decide to do more stuff.

[Guest]

Seems fairly chill to me.

 

And for the quintillionth time, Off Topic is for "NON-TECH RELATED CONTENT ONLY". so stop spouting "this is a tech forum". No, this is the non-tech section of a tech related forum. Nothing wrong with him sharing his creation here.

 

@swtscp Nice track, keep up the good work.

no, actually, offtopic is not dumping ground for memes etc... its for topics that dont fit any sub forums.

 

its ok tho. since its not meme or shitpost, I am ok with it tho, and i like to converse in offtopic as this is only forum I visit daily. oh btw, sorry for duble post  

[Trik'Stari]

no, actually, offtopic is not dumping ground for memes etc... its for topics that dont fit any sub forums.

 

its ok tho. since its not meme or shitpost, I am ok with it tho, and i like to converse in offtopic as this is only forum I visit daily.

You're right, for the most part. The description does say "new members can say Hi here", which is basically saying that this is the "Social" area of the forum.

 

We actually used to have a shitpost thread in Off Topic. It lasted for 72 glorious pages, before some jerk complained about an image of two girls kissing, and the mods deleted the entire thread.

 

(and no, I do not know why someone would complain about that image.)

[swtscp]

Seems fairly chill to me.

 

And for the quintillionth time, Off Topic is for "NON-TECH RELATED CONTENT ONLY". so stop spouting "this is a tech forum". No, this is the non-tech section of a tech related forum. Nothing wrong with him sharing his creation here.

 

@swtscp Nice track, keep up the good work.

thanks yeah it actually sounds chill to me too 

 

 

The middle part is pretty good. The beginning and end aren't really my cup of tea; I find them a bit too repetitive for my taste.

 

Don't let this discourage you, though.Too many cooks will spoil the broth, so you don't have to take what I say (or what anyone else says) into consideration. 

really? the middle part is what i hate the most oh well thanks

[Volbet]

really? the middle part is what i hate the most oh well thanks

Yeah, really. Maybe I should clarify: It's not that the beginning and the end are bad. They just come off as too reperitive for me. 

The slower middlepart is a nice break from that and I really do enjoy the very organic and minimalistic composition. 

 

And as I said, if you don't like my opinion you should just disregard it.

You aren't manking music for my sake. Hopefully, you are making music for your own sake. 

[swtscp]

Yeah, really. Maybe I should clarify: It's not that the beginning and the end are bad. They just come off as too reperitive for me. 

The slower middlepart is a nice break from that and I really do enjoy the minimalistic composition. 

 

And as I said, if you don't like my opinion you should just disregard it.

You aren't manking music for my sake. Hopefully, you are making music for your own sake. 

no no no, i like your feedback its just that i really hate the middle part myself

well hate is a strong word right there

[Guest]

no no no, i like your feedback its just that i really hate the middle part myself

well hate is a strong word right there

then take it out and make two seperate songs.

 

just, id like to hear at least some melody.