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Sometimes, the best way to know a person is not at a dinner table, nor a theatre, or coffee shop, or a beautiful park, but in bed.

Nothing really wrong with it but might as well

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Sometimes, the best way to know a person is not at a dinner table, nor a theatre, a coffee shop, a beautiful park, but in bed.

 

Please kindry correct moi.

 

Sometimes the best way to know a person is not at a dinner table, not a theatre, not a coffee shop, not a beautiful park, but in bed.

 

I tried making it soud a bit more poetic while following the rules that I know of...

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Sometimes, the best way to know a person is not at a dinner table, nor a theatre, or coffee shop, or a beautiful park, but in bed.

Nothing really wrong with it but might as well

 

 

Sometimes the best way to know a person is not at a dinner table, not a theatre, not a coffee shop, not a beautiful park, but in bed.

 

I tried making it soud a bit more poetic while following the rules that I know of...

 

 

Sometimes the best way to know a person is not at a dinner table, not a theatre, not a coffee shop, not a beautiful park, but hacking into his facebook and stalk the shit out of it.

 

Okay thanks buds.

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