Any tips?

[Neutrideo]

Hey, so i just finished a draft for a video for my church, it is viewable HERE . I need tips on it, What type of motion grpahics should i add if any. 

[iRileyx]

Too many short clips in my opinion, changing too often. Some longer clips in there would have been nice. 

[Theguywhobea]

Music makes it sound like a kickstarter campaign. 

[Neutrideo]

36 minutes ago, RKRiley said:

Too many short clips in my opinion, changing too often. Some longer clips in there would have been nice. 

I added short clips becuase we where following the 2 1/2 second rule. Each clip should be that length. For instance, in the james bond movie, each clip was 1 second.

 

35 minutes ago, Theguywhobea said:

Music makes it sound like a kickstarter campaign. 

Yeah, any suggestions for the music? we bought it off audio. https://www.audionetwork.com/browse/m/track/somethings-changing_132843 is the clip we are using., 

 

Originally we were going to use this https://audiojungle.net/item/the-corporate-motivation/20711279?s_rank=3

 

https://www.audionetwork.com/browse/m/track/twisted-heart_131333 is a potential candidate.

[iRileyx]

2 minutes ago, Neutrideo said:

I added short clips becuase we where following the 2 1/2 second rule. Each clip should be that length. For instance, in the james bond movie, each clip was 1 second.

Thats fine if its a short short video, but for a 3 minute long video it's not the best idea to follow it. doesn't really give enough time to understand what's happening before it moves onto the next. 

[Neutrideo]

10 minutes ago, RKRiley said:

Thats fine if its a short short video, but for a 3 minute long video it's not the best idea to follow it. doesn't really give enough time to understand what's happening before it moves onto the next. 

Thanks for the pointer!

[dizmo]

30 minutes ago, Neutrideo said:

I added short clips becuase we where following the 2 1/2 second rule. Each clip should be that length. For instance, in the james bond movie, each clip was 1 second.

Haha, yes but you're not making an action movie...I have to agree, some of the shots were too short. Some were to shaky.

When asking for opinions, it helps to give context. We don't even know what this video is for.

[vanished]

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