can you grade my work

[courtiousdoge]

i know i should not be posting story writing in ltt but i am really stressed just give your generally opinion of my work

Summative assessment edited final copy no 32 (not da lovecraftian horror 1).docx

also can you grade it out of  8

[Guest]

This goes in off topic

[courtiousdoge]

2 minutes ago, ChickenNugget said:

This goes in off topic

cant edit it know sorry for making that mistake can you guys please excuse mistakes for sometime because i am under a lot of stress becuase my marks will be going online

[Guest]

Depending on how old you are, I'd give it a solid B. It was a good story, but at least a little bit of exposition would be nice, and the figurative language seemed a little forced in the beginning, and lacking in the end. Otherwise, it's a good original plot, and an overall good short story

[courtiousdoge]

3 minutes ago, ChickenNugget said:

Depending on how old you are, I'd give it a solid B. It was a good story, but at least a little bit of exposition would be nice, and the figurative language seemed a little forced in the beginning, and lacking in the end. Otherwise, it's a good original plot, and an overall good short story

i m in 7th

[Guest]

Just now, courtiousdoge said:

i m in 7th

Oh, then a B+ or A-

@LionWaffles and I have been rounding up all the 12/13 year olds for a little while now. Wanna join our group?

[courtiousdoge]

1 minute ago, ChickenNugget said:

Oh, then a B+ or A-

@LionWaffles and I have been rounding up all the 12/13 year olds for a little while now. Wanna join our group?

thanks for the grading,and would love to join ur group (will send u steam id)

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4 minutes ago, ChickenNugget said:

and I have been rounding up all the 12/13 year olds for a little while now.

Well that's fucking creepy.

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2 minutes ago, JoeyDM said:

Well that's fucking creepy.

I am 12 years old. We all are. And I can't afford a white van