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That is actually really nice. I'm no designer so I can't really suggest what should be improved, but I would be happy with that being my BF4 clan logo.

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So I'm designing a logo for a Gaming clan in Bf4. Any suggestions before I submit the work?

eh change the second font to a different family please

or give it more contrast

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My opinion: the smoke effects don't blend well with the sparks on the right side. The sparks should be more cloudy in color instead of being contrasted with gray smoke. 
Red/Purple is great contrast with the dark background, but tbh i think the white is pushing it. I would shade the white just a little bit, cause a. the smoke makes it look like there'd be a "shadowy" effect that's not there and that's weird. b. Its the USC colors effect, its bright as fuck and I have a headache rn so my brain hurts looking at it. Just my opinion as an artist : P I could be 100% wrong tho cause biases etc etc : D Great job overall tho. 

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