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spwath
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I was bored, so wrote a 5 pg story.

How do you like it?

(sorry for pictures, wrote on laptop with no internet or USB)

Story gets a bit NSFW

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n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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you know you coulda put it in a spoiler.. and retyped it all not that hard xD

Sure, sure.

BUt i just typed it, i dint want to type it again.

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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You have a lot of free time.

It took me like 1 hour

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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Are you looking for any critque? Because that ending was really confusing and a little stupid. "We had to recreate the situation that got us together"? How does that work? Does that mean that the only way they are together in the future is through time traveller intervention in the past?

 

 

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Are you looking for any critque? Because that ending was really confusing and a little stupid. "We had to recreate the situation that got us together"? How does that work? Does that mean that the only way they are together in the future is through time traveller intervention in the past?

Yeah, I kinda rushed the ending, I'll fix it today

n0ah1897, on 05 Mar 2014 - 2:08 PM, said:  "Computers are like girls. It's whats in the inside that matters.  I don't know about you, but I like my girls like I like my cases. Just as beautiful on the inside as the outside."

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