Anyone with good gear want to help identify flaws in this production?

[That Norwegian Guy]

I left my reference headphones at my parents when I left this christmas, so I've been trying to finish this track with a pair of Behringers. I'm almost blind

 

If anyone would like to have a listen and let me know if they can hear problems pre-mastering, I would love to know:

 

https://soundcloud.com/bp_lofty/preparations

 

(Orchestral/ Soundtrack genre/ production music)

[VincentC]

0:31 That drop, it hurts, I think you dropped the volume too far. You should gradually lower the volume, but right now its a hard drop.

[mr moose]

I haven't heard it all and just ran out of time but it sounds to me like you need a little more channel separation.

[Flyguygamer]

0:31 That drop, it hurts, I think you dropped the volume too far. You should gradually lower the volume, but right now its a hard drop.

+1 

[That Norwegian Guy]

Thanks for the comments people! Helpful you are

[Lamarkuss]

The track could definitely be improved with more channel separation. Especially in the entrance of the song and in the final build the highs tend to blend and aren't as crisp making the end sound jagged. 

[Recon-UK]

It sounds overdone in certain parts with volume, and just rather uneven.

I also agree to the channel separation, there is quite a bit of fight between the sounds.

 

That drop is very noticeable, it sounds out of place.

[mr moose]

The track could definitely be improved with more channel separation. Especially in the entrance of the song and in the final build the highs tend to blend and aren't as crisp making the end sound jagged. 

not too much though, just a little, too much and it will sound like one of those a cheap home theatre packages at high volumes. :lol:

 

Good luck @That Norwegian Guy.