Youtube Video

[Indus Monk]

Gonna make my first ever youtube video.

HERE is the a part of the script for it:

 

 

Xiaomi is one the fastest growing company out there. It's a manufacturer of cellular and non cellular devices.Based in china, it is one of the fastest growing manufacturer of gadgets. Now over it's four years of existence,Xiaomi hs produced some of the best phones out there. Let's take up an example:

 

THE REDMI NOTE

 

It's a pretty good  phone with some great specs,and guess what......... there are 2 versions of this device! One is an octa core HSDPA enabled with MTK 6592. The Other one has LTE and a Snapdragon 615 octa core CPU with, i guess, Adreno 305!

Both come with 2 gigs of RAM AND a 5.5 inch Display. All this for ~$160. I have used the device personally and i found it very......ummmmm......... satisfying! The camera is good. the screen is 720p, which is good enough. The battery life is satisfactory and overall..... Yeah it's awesome!!!...

 

BUT the U.I. ...... uhhhhhh the U.I. it's, well, CHEAP. It is considered as the most blatant copy of iOS. And i don't like that. But otherwise, it's pretty good.

 

THOUGHTS?

[ericssin]

Check the first part repeating "out there" doesn't sound right. 

[Go_On_Shadow]

Seems ok, but from a youtuber, don't 100% follow the script, you will just sound monotonous.
good luck, And have fun!

[Indus Monk]

Seems ok, but from a youtuber, don't 100% follow the script, you will just sound monotonous.

good luck, And have fun!

here is the full content , what do you think??? :

 

 

Xiaomi is one the fastest growing company out there. It's a manufacturer of cellular and non cellular devices.Based in china, it is one of the fastest growing manufacturer of gadgets. Now over it's four years of existence,Xiaomi has produced some of the best phones there can be. Let's take up an example:

 

THE REDMI NOTE

 

It's a pretty good phone with some great specs,and guess what......... there are 2 versions of this device! One is an octa core HSDPA enabled with MTK 6592. The Other one has LTE and a Snapdragon 615 octa core CPU with, i guess, Adreno 305!

Both come with 2 gigs of RAM AND a 5.5 inch Display. All this for ~$160. I have used the device personally and i found it very......ummmmm......... satisfying! The camera is good. the screen is 720p, which is good enough. The battery life is satisfactory and overall..... Yeah it's awesome!!!...

 

BUT the U.I. ...... uhhhhhh the U.I. it's, well, CHEAP. It is considered as the most blatant copy of iOS. And i don't like that. But otherwise, it's a pretty darn good phone.And that is where the main problem lies.....THE U.I. It looks like iOS and is cheap and very, very, very gimmicky.

 

But I have a very simple message for Xiaomi and other chinese phone and tablet manufacturers:

 

"BE ORIGNAL OR BE CREATIVE."

 

that's it.I have seen a large deficit in devices running stock android. This is where they can easily cash in. I mean think about it, there are very few devices running stock android, and the tech community highly appreciates stock android. Just imagine the boom we will see in chinese phones, which, to some, may sound like apocalypse, But i think it won't be all bad. But these guys have to act fast or else NOKIA will take over.Remember the era of Nokia's domination??? they may just make a come back in 2018 or 2019. Then, it could be doom for all other companies......

[Go_On_Shadow]

 

here is the full content , what do you think??? :

 

 

Xiaomi is one the fastest growing company out there. It's a manufacturer of cellular and non cellular devices.Based in china, it is one of the fastest growing manufacturer of gadgets. Now over it's four years of existence,Xiaomi has produced some of the best phones there can be. Let's take up an example:

 

THE REDMI NOTE

 

It's a pretty good phone with some great specs,and guess what......... there are 2 versions of this device! One is an octa core HSDPA enabled with MTK 6592. The Other one has LTE and a Snapdragon 615 octa core CPU with, i guess, Adreno 305!

Both come with 2 gigs of RAM AND a 5.5 inch Display. All this for ~$160. I have used the device personally and i found it very......ummmmm......... satisfying! The camera is good. the screen is 720p, which is good enough. The battery life is satisfactory and overall..... Yeah it's awesome!!!...

 

BUT the U.I. ...... uhhhhhh the U.I. it's, well, CHEAP. It is considered as the most blatant copy of iOS. And i don't like that. But otherwise, it's a pretty darn good phone.And that is where the main problem lies.....THE U.I. It looks like iOS and is cheap and very, very, very gimmicky.

 

But I have a very simple message for Xiaomi and other chinese phone and tablet manufacturers:

 

"BE ORIGNAL OR BE CREATIVE."

 

that's it.I have seen a large deficit in devices running stock android. This is where they can easily cash in. I mean think about it, there are very few devices running stock android, and the tech community highly appreciates stock android. Just imagine the boom we will see in chinese phones, which, to some, may sound like apocalypse, But i think it won't be all bad. But these guys have to act fast or else NOKIA will take over.Remember the era of Nokia's domination??? they may just make a come back in 2018 or 2019. Then, it could be doom for all other companies......

 

Looking good!

[Indus Monk]

Looking good!

where can i improve?