Video style constructive critism.

[voaz]

Video style constructive critism.

I am in need of constructive critism on my way and style of making videos ( Battlefield 4 in this  case )

 

recent videos:

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDC8ZAERhvA

 

 

Thanks already, am trying to improve.

[Guest GRRigger]

Commentary, or talk with your buddy would make the gameplay better.

There is no need for someone to watch the video of BF4 gameplay. There are countless of them out there. Music does fit the video, but does not make it more enjoyable. Id rather see if you had like a buddy with you and play with mic.

 

I ask you, what is your target audience?

[voaz]

I don't really have a target audience except having it as my personal hobby, and to share it with friends mostly. I also don't actually need any subscribers at all but I want to get more into short film making. 'am not a fan of commentary-videos over games anymore.

[Guest GRRigger]

I don't really have a target audience except having it as my personal hobby, and to share it with friends mostly. I also don't actually need any subscribers at all but I want to get more into short film making. 'am not a fan of commentary-videos over games anymore.

So your target audience is friends. Then the video is fine.

Short film making? For wider audience? In games, or? Well i guess you learn production while you are doing it, so its a start.

You can play with video maker with special effects, like slow-mode / hearth beat while intense moments, or when grenade is near you or something.

[voaz]

So your target audience is friends. Then the video is fine.

Short film making? For wider audience? In games, or? Well i guess you learn production while you are doing it, so its a start.

You can play with video maker with special effects, like slow-mode / hearth beat while intense moments, or when grenade is near you or something.

Some mixed style, video games in a more serious movie style, somewhat like a campaign of a shooter is.

I've also used a few small special effect things which were cool in my opinion.

 

Thanks for your input.