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[NathanahtaN]

Ok firstly I KNOW VERY WELL that this forum is not the right place for this kind of topic but i dont know of any better forum places where this better belongs so i thought ill post it here expecting no one to reply OR READ this

 

so when i write lyrics i end up doing either one of these

 

Lyrics rhyme but has no story or simply doent make sense

 

lyrics have a story and has meaning but doesnt rhyme

 

and it fustrates me because most songs have lyrics that have a story and a meaning AND rhyme, so i am always trying to make my own lyrics rhyme but i get nowhere, can ANYONE help

 

here are the lyrics i have so far

 

(Spoken)
Our Story is set in the great outback of Australia, 
Where the Emu, Kangaroo and Cockatoo have gathered around,
Around a cosy campfire with plenty of company,
I sing a song about this place i call home.

 

VERSE 1
Here in Australia,
There's alot of Nostalgia,
Plenty of things to see,
Like old Crocodile Dundee,

 

PRE-CHORUS
We got animals galore,
A few i adore,
But on this continent,
Only one thing is Prominent,

 

CHORUS
I love campin' in the bush,
I love making damper
Good Ol' Billy Tea
Is the only one for me
I know i sound old fashioned
But to be honest
I prefer the Swagmans way
Just call me Swaggy Jay

[Praesi]

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