Hey Brandon,
Long time watcher, first time commenter.
Excellent video. Looking forward to the next one. I really enjoyed it despite being a bit of a camera noob. I found the language appropriate and easy to follow.
However, when the slide (starting form 1:10) was introduced I think that it was too cluttered. With a lot of "unnecessary words." Such as "you get out of your camera" It could have been put on the screen and not needed a voice over as you were reading it word for word.
Instead, I think that it would have been much more effective if you had only a couple of keywords on the slide and read out the same thing.
Eg.
1. Widens the field of view
2. Adds overall sharpness
3. Seemingly increases the amount of light that enters the camera
With the same voice over. Which was very well done.
On a different note. I thought that it was a interesting choice to use "your" instead of "the." It feels more like an ad with "your" and "the" makes you seem more objective.
These are just my thoughts, and not a criticism. I hope that you find this opinion useful. Even if you do not follow them. If any of these decisions were deliberate I would be interested to hear your thought process as to why. As well as those from the community.
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