Jump to content
Search In
  • More options...
Find results that contain...
Find results in...

so I went out and did one of my first shoots, firemen bikes and water! please rate this video from 1/10 and leave what i could improve, thanks.

 

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

Self promotion/referrals are not allowed.

 

 

TMC said probably, he didn't say it is wink.png. In reality it depends on the niceness of whichever mod strolls over this thread

 

 

advertising

 

but I want to learn from my stuff, this isn't advertising, I'm not trying to get you sub'd, i don't wnat you to sub

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

4/10.

 

the change in audio levels is to abrupt.

 

try a better camera, a different exposure, and a different title spalsh.

 

either way, against CoC.

 

@colonel_mortis (Sorry I keep referencing you).

Link to post
Share on other sites

4/10.

 

the change in audio levels is to abrupt.

 

try a better camera, a different exposure, and a different title spalsh.

 

either way, against CoC.

 

@colonel_mortis (Sorry I keep referencing you).

 

ok but thanks, i at least learned something :)

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

ok but thanks, i at least learned something :)

Sorry I had to report, but this is against the CoC.

  :(

Link to post
Share on other sites

2/10 pretty boring bruh

|Intel Core i5-4670K| |Gigabyte Z97P-D3| |Seagate 1TB SSHD| |Fractal Design Define S| |Corsair CS650M| |Asus PB278Q| |Cooler Master CM Storm Devastator Bundle|

Link to post
Share on other sites

1/10, loud obnoxious dubstep, and CoC 

 

 

4/10.

 

the change in audio levels is to abrupt.

 

try a better camera, a different exposure, and a different title spalsh.

 

either way, against CoC.

 

@colonel_mortis (Sorry I keep referencing you).

 

but in editing, it sounded good, the same audio level, and when i exported it, the same story

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

but in editing, it sounded good, the same audio level, and when i exported it, the same story

hmmm...

 

Which editing program?

Link to post
Share on other sites

so I went out and did one of my first shoots, firemen bikes and water! please rate this video from 1/10 and leave what i could improve, thanks.

 

I actually like it. It's pretty funny. The intermittent Skrillex-Cinema was reminiscent of the John Cena prank call. 10/10 it made me laugh.

Intel Core i7-6700K | Corsair H105 | Asus Z170I PRO GAMING | G.Skill TridentZ Series 16GB | 950 PRO 512GB M.2

 

Asus GeForce GTX 980 Ti 6GB STRIX OC | BitFenix Prodigy (Black/Red) | XFX PRO Black Edition 850W

 

 

My BuildPCPartPicker | CoC

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

hmmm...

 

Which editing program?

 

sony vegas pro 13

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

I actually like it. It's pretty funny. The intermittent Skrillex-Cinema was reminiscent of the John Cena prank call. 10/10 it made me laugh.

 

is this sarcastic?

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

sony vegas pro 13

hmmm..

 

something must be wrong with the export.

 

either way, the audio jumps around way to quickly..

 

And I gotta go, so bye!

Link to post
Share on other sites

is this sarcastic?

 

No. I actually laughed. Good job!

Intel Core i7-6700K | Corsair H105 | Asus Z170I PRO GAMING | G.Skill TridentZ Series 16GB | 950 PRO 512GB M.2

 

Asus GeForce GTX 980 Ti 6GB STRIX OC | BitFenix Prodigy (Black/Red) | XFX PRO Black Edition 850W

 

 

My BuildPCPartPicker | CoC

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

No. I actually laughed. Good job!

 

thanks bro

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

I'd suggest working on stabilizing the video, perhaps a tripod?

Specs: CPU - Intel i7 8700K @ 5GHz | GPU - Gigabyte GTX 970 G1 Gaming | Motherboard - ASUS Strix Z370-G WIFI AC | RAM - XPG Gammix DDR4-3000MHz 32GB (2x16GB) | Main Drive - Samsung 850 Evo 500GB M.2 | Other Drives - 7TB/3 Drives | CPU Cooler - Corsair H100i Pro | Case - Fractal Design Define C Mini TG | Power Supply - EVGA G3 850W

Link to post
Share on other sites

I'd suggest working on stabilizing the video, perhaps a tripod?

 

crazy as is, i don't have or have money for a tripod.

but i heard someone say that i should get a better camera, it's f#cking 24mp, a sony nex-3n, don't you know how awsome that is for me?

Specs and peripherals:

Spoiler

Main pc:

Peripherals

Spoiler

2X Acer k222HQL | Logitech G19 | Logitech G300/Logitech MX Master | Logitech X-230 | SONY MDR-RF 810R

Specs:

Spoiler

AMD fx 8350 | 8gb 1600mhz  Crucial Sport | GT 210 <_<,with a gtx 645 | red / black NZXT. S340 | CM seidon 120V V.2 | corsair cx600 | wd 1TB blue X2|

 

Other stuff:

Spoiler

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

crazy as is, i don't have or have money for a tripod

 

Then ya better get saving!

Specs: CPU - Intel i7 8700K @ 5GHz | GPU - Gigabyte GTX 970 G1 Gaming | Motherboard - ASUS Strix Z370-G WIFI AC | RAM - XPG Gammix DDR4-3000MHz 32GB (2x16GB) | Main Drive - Samsung 850 Evo 500GB M.2 | Other Drives - 7TB/3 Drives | CPU Cooler - Corsair H100i Pro | Case - Fractal Design Define C Mini TG | Power Supply - EVGA G3 850W

Link to post
Share on other sites

 it's f#cking 24mp, a sony nex-3n, don't you know how awsome that is for me?

 

that is irrelevant for video, considering 1080p is only about 2mp

Desktop - Corsair 300r i7 4770k H100i MSI 780ti 16GB Vengeance Pro 2400mhz Crucial MX100 512gb Samsung Evo 250gb 2 TB WD Green, AOC Q2770PQU 1440p 27" monitor Laptop Clevo W110er - 11.6" 768p, i5 3230m, 650m GT 2gb, OCZ vertex 4 256gb,  4gb ram, Server: Fractal Define Mini, MSI Z78-G43, Intel G3220, 8GB Corsair Vengeance, 4x 3tb WD Reds in Raid 10, Phone Oppo Reno 10x 256gb , Camera Sony A7iii

Link to post
Share on other sites

crazy as is, i don't have or have money for a tripod.

but i heard someone say that i should get a better camera, it's f#cking 24mp, a sony nex-3n, don't you know how awsome that is for me?

 

You don't need a better camera... yet.

 

You need to stabilize your camera, so a tripod and fluid video head is a good investment.  You need to consider using a focus pulling system.  You also need to work on composition.

In terms of post production, color grading needs work.

 

What where your camera settings? 

Guide: DSLR or Video camera?, Guide: Film/Photo makers' useful resources, Guide: Lenses, a quick primer

Nikon D4, Nikon D800E, Fuji X-E2, Canon G16, Gopro Hero 3+, iPhone 5s. Hasselblad 500C/M, Sony PXW-FS7

ICT Consultant, Photographer, Video producer, Scuba diver and underwater explorer, Nature & humanitarian documentary producer

Link to post
Share on other sites

It's hilarious to me as to how many people are missing the point here. There are some things in the video that are genuinely funny, and the semi-amateur, handheld shooting (plus the cuts to dubstep) work well with how ridiculous the content is. What I adore about this thread is how people are looking at a silly video and thinking, "Well, the exposure isn't very good, and the colors look rather bad, so this is a solid 2.35/10 for me."

 

You want appropriate advice? Work on the general pacing of the video - something like this could have been about a minute in length instead, and the title screen isn't very necessary. Cutting could be timed better, too: some shots felt like they dragged on a bit (like the one from 0:29 to 0:40), and the time at which they are introduced is a bit off. Perhaps include an exposition shot of the firemen getting ready, to give the dive some context. That's mostly it, since the enjoyment here isn't about the quality, but rather the content - and it's actually decent content.

"M. Aronnax." replied the Canadian, "your arguments are rotten at the foundation. You speak in the future, 'We shall be there! we shall be here!' I speak in the present, 'We are here, and we must profit by it.'"

Link to post
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now

×