Editing tips?

[MeDownYou]

So had a friend shoot case footage the other day and I turned it into this last night

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I'm a hobbyist at some editing and want to improve. Any tips? Currently I'm using Sony Vegas Pro to Edit. This was around 6 minutes of footage originally, What really bugs me is 2 things one that the one shot doesn't show the inside of the top of the case, when slow panning on the bottom, and two that there is noticeable shake from moving the camera ( I can't be too picky he got me the footage since we needed 10 minutes of junk filmed for a class) 

[Fungal]

Looks good but a lot of the shots look out of focus but maybe that's just your phone camera. I'd checkout hardware canucks on youtube if you wanna see it done very well.