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Random brain farts before I drink my cup of coffee...

 

I'm not a grammarian by education, but I do think the one encircled in red could've been written so much better.

 

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  1. DrMacintosh

    DrMacintosh

    Intel bad

  2. Jtalk4456

    Jtalk4456

    grammatically it's fine, but the "weak" was an unnecessary descriptor that made the sentence sound more drawn out and wierd

  3. captain_to_fire

    captain_to_fire

    @Jtalk4456 I would've written it as "Note how much space the weak integrated graphics has occupied on the CPU", which I think is better.

  4. Jtalk4456

    Jtalk4456

    yeah, a bit of different order would have done it wonders

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