am trying to start a Tech Review blog here is my first Review criticism needed

[christopherx64]

http://rushtontechreviews.wordpress.com/2014/10/26/logitech-g400s-optical-gaming-mouse-review/

 

My first review so take pitty grammer and format are not good but criticism needed.

[JefferyD90]

#1 you never talked about the Gsoftware from Logitech

#2 your English is way off, several mistakes.  "Basically is a sensor that allows for more precise movement" is not a complete statement

#3 you are giving objective points of view, "I really like this this and this" but you never say HOW you like it.  Its like someone saying "I like the new iPhone 6 Plus because its big", but someone who has never seen a iPhone 6 Plus might not know HOW big it is.  They might think "Oh wow this guy likes it and says its the perfect size phone" but we all know depending upon the person things will change.

 

Overall grade C-.  It is a valid point of view and something I could use to validate my decision of buying this product, but it is NOT something that will convince me.

 

Edit  ---

 

Reason why I mentioned #1, I assume you never installed it.  If you never installed it, then you don't have the drivers for the mouse, meaning you don't have the right sensitivity, meaning you don't have the right bindings, meaning you don't have the full experience.  This also suggest that you didn't have the previous mouse's drivers installed, so you have a fake sense of what the old mouse was like.  Point of #1 is it COMPLETLY discredits your review to someone who does know what they are talking about.

[ImBleu]

#1 you never talked about the Gsoftware from Logitech

#2 your English is way off, several mistakes.  "Basically is a sensor that allows for more precise movement" is not a complete statement

#3 you are giving objective points of view, "I really like this this and this" but you never say HOW you like it.  Its like someone saying "I like the new iPhone 6 Plus because its big", but someone who has never seen a iPhone 6 Plus might not know HOW big it is.  They might think "Oh wow this guy likes it and says its the perfect size phone" but we all know depending upon the person things will change.

 

Overall grade C-.  It is a valid point of view and something I could use to validate my decision of buying this product, but it is NOT something that will convince me.

 

This.

 

Take a listen to the kind of things you find from Linus's videos or pcper / hardwarecanuks and the likes. Try get to that kind of level of scripting :3

[PokémonTrainerFour]

I can't grade reviews as a bad writer, but as a graphic designer, I think your website could be a little less bland.

 

If you have to, use Tumblr, get some color onto your site, make it stand out.

[christopherx64]

#1 you never talked about the Gsoftware from Logitech

#2 your English is way off, several mistakes.  "Basically is a sensor that allows for more precise movement" is not a complete statement

#3 you are giving objective points of view, "I really like this this and this" but you never say HOW you like it.  Its like someone saying "I like the new iPhone 6 Plus because its big", but someone who has never seen a iPhone 6 Plus might not know HOW big it is.  They might think "Oh wow this guy likes it and says its the perfect size phone" but we all know depending upon the person things will change.

 

Overall grade C-.  It is a valid point of view and something I could use to validate my decision of buying this product, but it is NOT something that will convince me.

 

Edit  ---

 

Reason why I mentioned #1, I assume you never installed it.  If you never installed it, then you don't have the drivers for the mouse, meaning you don't have the right sensitivity, meaning you don't have the right bindings, meaning you don't have the full experience.  This also suggest that you didn't have the previous mouse's drivers installed, so you have a fake sense of what the old mouse was like.  Point of #1 is it COMPLETLY discredits your review to someone who does know what they are talking about.

Currently taking all advice and editing it as i type now

[emachado99]

It's a good start. 

 

Just try not to use unnecessary capitals and maybe make it look a little less boring. 

[christopherx64]

it is updated however this is my first attempt at formating

[MuffinTopMike]

Use a wordpress template to update the look of your site.

[Guest]

Good review, but as other stated, it could use some liveliness. Try to inject some personal stuff, instead of just facts. That's what makes people want to read more stuff!

Also, if you'd like, you could post drafts of your next one or two reviews here, and we could help critique it so the final one you publish has already been gone over by peers and is better. It's hard to find mistakes in your own work!